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Reviews for Book of Shadows

By : lux
  • From ANON - wilde rose on December 15, 2004
    There are fan fictions in this world which I enjoy, because they are funny, or amusing, or heart-wrenching. This story is in a league of it's own. It's beautiful, it's wonderful, it's dark in a way that one can relate to, in a way that makes sense, in a way that isn't forced. I love the way you write Snape, he's my favourite character and you portray him perfectly. If I could give you one bit of advice, it would be to write forever. This story is *stunning*. Some people want to write a depressed Harry, an unhappy Harry, but mostly they're people who have no idea about anything. You have taken a hold of Harry's character and molded it so perfectly...I love the way he acts, the defiance. And it's understandable. You make everything so believable, you take a hold of emotions and feelings and give them to these characters who you portray wonderfully and wrap everything up into a gruesome loveliness...like Harry's pictures, perfect in their flaws. Not that this story has any flaws, but you know what I mean, I hope.

    I especially loved the way you described the picture of the young man. "Slit my throat, watch me bleed, I swear I'll do it prettily."...there are no words.

    I just want you to know that this is probably my most favourite bit of writing...ever.
    Out of everything.
    In the world.
    Know that. :D

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  • From ANON - Necromant on October 25, 2003
    I loved this artistic Harery ery much! And his attitude towards Dumbledore and the others was really facinating. I loved this fic, but to tell the truth I was surprised that after a whole 10 chapters the only real interaction between Harry and Severus was a hand on a shoulder and just a "stay". At least a kiss (ven a small one) *sigh* i know it's your stlye but i felt the urge to write my opinion. As i said great fic! ;)
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  • From ANON - Nel on June 14, 2003
    Beautiful ... artfully written, very angsty and ... bright. You know I don't think I've ever read a fic of this kind with a happy ending?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2003
    i loved it but the ending was to blah for me. it was so simple but the rest of it was so dark. i just wish it would of had more to it at the end.
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  • From ANON - Frances on June 05, 2003
    *sighs happily* I adore this. It's just beautiful. The ending fits so perfectly.
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  • From ANON - photis on June 04, 2003
    Hi - that was a truely beautiful story and you obviously are a very talented writer, to take tired old themes and breathe new lifto tto them....

    Just one thing though AFF.net is annoying as it has a word limit for each chapter entry, and you seem to have exceeded it in the first and second chapter. the ends of part 3, all 4 and 5 as well as the end of 8 and all of 9. In a way it's good, because even if you don't continue it, there's of of this wonderful story for me to read!!!

    ~Photis~
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  • From ANON - MJ on June 04, 2003
    Ummmm why does it skip from chapter 3 to 6?
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  • From ANON - JuneBug2089 on December 11, -0001
    CUTE!!!!!! that was a great story....i liked it ^_^
    JuneBug
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  • From ANON - Lakoma on May 01, 2003
    I'd really like to see you add more to this story.
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  • From ANON - Nara on March 17, 2003
    This was a beautiful story, you know. I wish I could write that good. I like how you described things and the way you made Harry think. It was just a really good fic. I hope you write more in the future, something along the lines of this. I'd enjoy reading more of your fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - SailorChibi on March 16, 2003
    Although it was a little dark, I thought your story was magnificent. I've never really been a fan of Harry/Severus, but I do like your story, more then I tho I w I would upon originally coming into it. I think your style of writing suits this coupling very well, and it might be an idea for you to persue writing this coupling. I know if I came upon future works of yours with this coupling I would most assuredly read it. Bravo, you did an incredible job on this fic!
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  • From ANON - Lady of Arundel on March 16, 2003
    Brilliant! Wonderful! Masterfully written....I must scurry back to the beginning and reread, I'm entranced....and do write the next book SOON!!!

    *bows humbly*
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  • From ANON - Raija on March 16, 2003
    I...This...Well.AHHHHH! I can't find words to say...But I guess I should try. You made me cry,you made me laugh and you made as desperate as Harry. You should write a book like this. The story was inspirating and it sucked you in,like you were there. This a great piece of art. I'll won't forget. I am not saying never or ever because they are too strong words but I loved this....even love is lame hen I try to describe your story.
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  • From ANON - jess on March 15, 2003
    really really good story and i love the descriptive language you use. its really excellent. but the story cuts off at the end. i dont know if there was supposed to be more or if there is another chapter or anything, but hey if there is email me! i would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Inge on March 09, 2003
    Where did the rest go? Just kidding ;). Lovely story, I hope you continue soon. Great job with Harry's feelings..

    Love, Inge
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