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Reviews for Ashes to Ashes

By : XRaven
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Mars on July 19, 2005
    Seriously.. only one chapter? This was just getting really good.. I love the premise of your story.
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  • From ANON - olivea on February 10, 2005
    that was fantastic, i do hope you do continu to write more chapters.
    i will be waiting and hopeing !
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  • From ANON - Heidi on January 15, 2005
    This is really, really interesting. Please continue, I'm intrigued! I like your style, and thus far you've portrayed the characters very well. Not out of character at all, from my point of view, anyway. Then again, it's only the first chapter, so it's hard to tell, but this is very good!

    --Heidi
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2005
    AHHHH THATS AN ABSOLUTELY TERRIBLE CLIFF HANGER!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEUPDATE!!! i love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Isobel L on January 04, 2005
    Yes, you should continue! I'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - pinky on January 04, 2005
    Poor Hermione. Interesting potion though. Sounds horrible but vaguely fitting. I so can't wait to see where you go with this. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Lady Passion on January 04, 2005
    YOU MUST KEEP GOING, IT IS AN ORDER SOLDIER.

    ALWAYS YOURS,
    Lady Passion
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  • From ANON - June on January 03, 2005
    Ch 1 - sounds intriguing! Yes, please continue - I'd like to see if Severus figures out what Hermione is up to, and whether her potion succeeds.
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  • From ANON - Anna on June 07, 2004
    MORE! I mean, could I have some more please?
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  • From ANON - mother on June 03, 2004
    I'm intrigued. I like Hermione best when she is breaking the rules to do what she thinks is right. Such as stealing from Snape's stores in CoS. I will be really interested to see where this goes. Also I have read your other story and enjoyed it. I have to say I agree with Draco wholeheartedly. Will there be an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Spaz141 on June 03, 2004
    Well writtnd ind intriguing. Thanks. I look forward to reading more as you have time.
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  • From ANON - darthelwig on June 01, 2004
    I really like this story. You set an excellent mood and sense of 'place'. I also like the way you wrote Hermione. I get really tired of seeing her terribly out of character. Great job and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on May 31, 2004
    A good start! A hook to lure me in! There is a difference between criticism and constructive criticism and some people need to criticise just to validate themselves so try not to take it to heart. My motto in life is "don't criticise unless you can do better yourself" and I can' bet better so "you go girl!" Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 31, 2004
    I think this word should be nonexistent rather than inexistent. Other than that, the story is great. I always wondered why Hermione as brilliant as she is never did anything more to avenge her parents deaths. (In fan fiction that is. Haven't read the books so don't know what's cannon.) Very much looking forward to the next chapter to see what Snape has to say about her Knockturn Alley visit.
    More soon please.
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