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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 09, 2004
    great new chapter. I love how you are able to dish out the chapters so often. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on June 09, 2004
    I really like your take on the marriage law. And the plot thickens..... I keep wondering if Miss Abbott is perhaps Snape's daughter but she would be too young seeing as his marriage to Olivia was when he was 21 which was about 18 years ear, in, in general. Could Miss Abbott be Olivia reincarnate or something? Anyway, I like the story and how you do two or three updates a day which is great. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 09, 2004
    It's me again. I know I've already reviewed the last two chapters, but then I read one of the reviews someone esle posted regarding the ages not working out for the Abbott girl to be Severus's daughter. So I had to go back and reread the chapter where he talks about Olivia. I think that reviewer was right. Sounds like the girl would need to be Hermiones age or maybe a year or so younger. Six years difference is too much for the time to work out. So my new theroy is... I don't have a new theroy yet. But I will. Again, Excellent story! Well written, and with a unique take on what has became a very over done plot! Updates would probably help me with that new theroy thing....
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 09, 2004
    I like the new chapter. I like it that Severus and Hermione are getting closer. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 09, 2004
    Great story so far i really love it and if you want a beta reader i am still here. I hope that when the story is finished it will have a some what happy ending. Please keep updating i can't wait to see what will happen next especially with ron lol. By the way are there any warnings for this story?????????

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 08, 2004
    Hey, you snuck an update in without me seeing it! However, now that I've found it let me say, that was excellent!! Not in further in the Abbot mystery, though. I still think she's Severus's daughter. Although you'd think that he'd have noticed the baby missing at the time of the miscarraige. Hmmmm... and Ron, whats up with him?! All jealous and nosy. He's going to be a problem later isn't he? Can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 08, 2004
    Well Ron the prat showed up in this chapter. The others took it well. The whole idea of a fake marriage, well I never thought that. Of course this is a Severus/Hermione fic so........Anyway, this was a great chapter to go with a great story. Looking forward to see how the rest of the school handles the marriage. And what about the little girl? Can't wait to find out who she is.
    More soon please.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 08, 2004
    Hey, I have to way I was wary of starting to read yet another Marraige Law fic, but I like your story. I also love the relationship between Hermione and Snape and I like how you have things flowing nicely. I'll be looking for more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 08, 2004
    Glad to see that most of her friends are being sensible. Also interesting to see how all the practical details are being worked out. It would be awkward for Hermione (and Severus) if they didn't think all that through before classes resume.
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  • From ANON - Phantasia on June 08, 2004
    Hey great chapters. I just got around to reading them today. By any chance could the little girl be his daughter? Hum. Just wondering.

    Phantasia
    :P
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 08, 2004
    Great new chapters. I think you are doing a great job on this st Ke Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 08, 2004
    It's me again! Loved the last three chapters. So where do I think the story's going? Either Olivia faked her death, and took her daughter to live as a muggle, or she hid the baby somehow before she died. It would be interesting if she were still alive...would Hermione and Severus's marriage still be valid? Would Malfoy have a claim then? There are so many possibilities. Do post more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on June 08, 2004
    Love this fic!! From the first chapter you had me hooked. The relationship between Severus and Hermione is unfolding like a beautiful flower!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 08, 2004
    Very nice. I like how their relationship is developing. Wonder if Miss Abbott is Olivia's child, though the age is wrong. Looking forward to finding out.
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  • From ANON - Gia on June 08, 2004
    Delicious Snape-y goodness. Thank you for avoiding the trap of Bastard!Snape and Whiny!Hermione. Rarely do I grin while reading fanfic, but you made my day. I cannot wait to read the rest!!
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