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Reviews for Marriage Vows

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 07, 2004
    Great story. Love the way Hermione and Severus have come together. Can't wait to find out what the heck the Malfoys were up to. And the little girl, who is she? Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - KAT1441 on June 07, 2004
    WOW! I normally skip the marraige contract stories because they are all so very similar, but I couldn't find anything else to read so I tried yours.. and WOW! That was a solid hour and a half of reading, I couldn't stop! I can't figure what Malfoy wants Hermione for, but I'm almost positive that the little Abbot girl is Severus's and Olivia daughter, whom Severus believes to be dead. If thats right will they be discovoring the truth soon? Clearly she was adopted, so will she remain in the custody of the adoptive parents or will Severus demand her return? Poor Hermione, too. Step mom to a fellow student... thats sort of ewww... but excellent story and update more soon!!! Please!
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  • From ANON - Raija on June 07, 2004
    Oh yes this was great.
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  • From ANON - Sharon on June 07, 2004
    This is turning into a fascinating story; quite unique. Can't wait to see where you take the plot. The dynamic between SS and HG is intriguing. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Phantasia on June 07, 2004
    I really enjoy your story. please keep writing it.
    :P
    Phantasia
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  • From ANON - Ryn on June 07, 2004
    I am really loving this. You see so many of these challenge fics, especially for this particular challenge and this is one of the ones I am eagerly awaiting updates on. I hope to see the next couple of chapters up very very soon. Crossing my fingers they are up when I get home from work at 7 Mountain standard. Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 07, 2004
    Lovely ceremony, and your descriptions are beautiful. BTW, I checked out The Winter Tale and although I would never have picked that pairing, its turned into quite an interesting and lovely love story. Thanks for the heads up.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 06, 2004
    I liked the new chapter. Thanks for updating so quickly. Great work.
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 06, 2004
    So as I was previously reviewing, you posted a new chapter..yea!!! So let me guess.....Maria Abbott is Olivia and Snape's daughter? If so, how did she survive? Is Olivia still alive? Enquiring minds want to know...
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 06, 2004
    I really like your story. I can't wait to see what the Malfoys have planned for Hermione and how Miss Abbott got into Slytherin. Do update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 06, 2004
    Great new chapters. I love it that you update so quickly. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 06, 2004
    Great new chapters. I love it that you update so quickly. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Seshat on June 06, 2004
    So far I'm really liking the story. While Snape is very much OOC from canon, you've taken the character in a direction where the OOC-ness is understandable. I like that you took the time to show Snape acting as a Head of House - that's something that's not often addressed in fanfic so it's always interesting to see how people interpret how he'd act in that capacity.

    I like the characterizations of the Grangers, they make sense in the contect of the story.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 06, 2004
    Very intriguing chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out why Lucius is so desperate to get his hands on Hermione. Thanks for the heads up on the other story. I'll check it out.
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  • From ANON - raija on June 06, 2004
    You must update this soon. I like this a lot this far.
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