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Reviews for Marriage Vows

By : selened
  • From ANON - illnevertell on December 07, 2004

    WHEW!!!! That was one hell of an unexpected bit of information!!!!!!!! I Damn near fell out of my chair!! LMAO! I had to get up and walk around the room for a few minutes! You could have knocked me over with a feather. I so did NOT see that coming. I usually like to think that I am on the ball and can reasonably anticipate how a plot is going to move along and I did suspect the whole Ron interference bit but Severus and Lucius Malfoy LOVERS????? That one blindsided me! * Congratulations * !! You are the very first author to achieve a completely shocked squeal out of me!! You are GOOD!!!! I have loved this story from the moment I began reading it in fact it is about 5:30 am and I have not been able to tear myself away from it. I know there is no way I can go to sleep until I finish it. I also would like to say that I have never seen anything in your stories that would make me think that you need a beta! I hate it when anal retentive morons try to use these reviews to nit pick and stroke their own egos by pointing out any trivial oversight by the author. If they cant enjoy a fantastic story without needing to say something negative then they should not be reading fan fiction. If they expect perfection then they can go and pay for it at a book store! I have read some of your other stories and I have enjoyed all of them very much. * kudos * on an amazing plot twist that left me speechless! ( and that is no small feat as my husband could assure you!) Keep up the great work,
    Jaimie
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 05, 2004
    Another very nice chapter. Glad to see Severus and Hermione talking sense into her parents. He's really making an effort, and hopefully they now realize that. 32 chapters! Looking forward to it. Also nice to know the story is actually done. So many times I start to get into a story, then the author just stops writing on it. But, I really can't complain too much because I can't write fiction at all.
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  • From ANON - ice on August 18, 2004
    this is going to sound really dumb, but how do you make bacon sandwiches? I am very curious. If you could e-mail me as to how to make them, I would really appreicate that. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - meggie on June 30, 2004
    This was a really great fic. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - lacey weasley on June 28, 2004
    I loved your stories. I found the Olivia and Severus compainion piece here. I started reading on Lord and Lady Snape and took the hint and looked elsewhere. So I'm impatient.

    I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 17, 2004
    Fell violently ill yesterday, so I finished today. Brilliant story. Thanks for the warning last chapter. I'm a little disappointed with the epilogue, any plans to write a sequel? So many things are left open and being the polyanna that I am I need resolution. Thanks I enjoyed the read.
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  • From ANON - VegasVWchiK on June 17, 2004
    *sigh* that was a beautiful story. But I suppose that all great things must come to an end. I'm looking forward to sequel ;)
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  • From ANON - sarah on June 16, 2004
    your going to do a sequel right?! About what happens to marria and draco and the preg. girls and severus's new job and how everyone reacts to it and the news of malfoy and hermiones baby and what she does after the baby is born! There was so much left unresolved you cant end it here! PLEASE do a sequel! oh and yea i LOVED this story!
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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 16, 2004
    nice ending to a wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Sharon on June 16, 2004
    Enjoyed the story. Hope you write a sequel as there are so many plot lines still to follow (kind of like life?) and I'd love to see where you take them.

    Sharon
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 16, 2004
    Really great story. Hope there is going to be a sequel. Would love to see life at the house in Hogsmede. And what the baby is. More, please.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 16, 2004
    Great final chapter, but its not really the final since you are writing a companion piece which I cannot wait to start reading. I was happy to see you gave Severus a distinguished place and have him as a member of the Wizengamot. This was a wonderful story and I admit once more I was wary at first to start reading another marriage challenge story, but you did such a wonderful job I couldn't stop reading.

    Please dont' keep us waiting long.
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  • From ANON - Yavonna Han on June 16, 2004
    I have read your entire story and I really enjoyed it . I have read most of the other marriage law fics and liked your different twist. I was however very disapointe the the ending.
    I wasnt ready for it to end and I want to see how the house goes and all the other things you mentioned them doing. Just a sugestion Make another chaopter or 3 take it through the deliveries. I would really appreciate it I enjoy you writting.
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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 16, 2004
    wow!....that was....wow! i loved seeing that differnt side of draco. when malfoy grabbed that wand, i was like don't kill hermione!
    malfoy got what he deserved....

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 16, 2004
    Great chapter. Lucius got his just desserts. Good for Draco, now he can be greater than his father ever was. Looking forward to the eppi.

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