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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 16, 2004
    Lucius finally gets what's coming to him! I feel so sorry for Draco, but glad to see he's turned out to be a good young man, protective of his aunt and not wanting to hurt her anymore. Also glad to see how the Abbotts reacted to all of this, still loving Maria and being protective of Draco. Looking forward to the epilogue and any future stories you write. :)
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  • From ANON - duchess792003 on June 16, 2004
    I've really enjoyed the journey you've taken us on with this story. I don't want to see it end and I was happy to see in your A/N that you pla planning on some companion stories. Hope to see them posted soon!
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  • From ANON - Innogen on June 16, 2004
    Very good chapter! Too bad Lucious is dying before the rest of the charges can be confirmed though. I can't believe this is being wrapped up so fast. Great job! --Innogen
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 16, 2004
    Wow! I can't say much more than that. This chapter was fantastic. I felt sorry for Draco, but I'm glad he had the support of Hermione and the Abotts. I also get the feeling you are setting things up for a future romance between Draco and Maria. Even though she's his aunt, I think the relation is far enough to where maybe they can get together. I'm glad you didn't let Lucius get away with anything after all he had done. I can't wait for your next chapter.


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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 16, 2004
    Great chapter, I can't wait until the last one. If you wish to post this story at Lord and Lady Snape, or Whispers, or some other site, you can always just copy and paste the text. That's how I post mine. Great work!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 15, 2004
    Pretty heavy stuff the last 2 chapters. Glad Susan came clean and let Severus know it was Blaize. Think the house thing and the aurors is neat. Can't wait for the trial. I even feel sorry for Draco. Looking forward to the remainder of the story.
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 15, 2004
    After a really horrible day at work, I was so happy to see two new chapters posted. It really made my night. I can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 15, 2004
    Great chapters. I get the feeling there may be a friendship developing between Draco and Hermione in the future, which would be nice. I like their talking while in bed. It was nice and you could really see them as a real married couple discussing their future plans. I'm looking forward to the trial. I hope you don't let Lucius get away with anything.


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  • From ANON - kelly on June 15, 2004
    iv been really enjoying the story. once you have finshed it maybe you should post it over on Lord and Lady Snape. also will you be doing a sequle to the story, i think you should. keep up the good writing later kelly
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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 15, 2004
    excellent chapter as always..
    update when you get the chance
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  • From ANON - Blueeyes on June 15, 2004
    I have been reading this story for some time now, and i love it....I cant wait to read more and soon i hope....Have you thought about doing a further story...say...10 years from now, containing the same people...I really want to know what the life of Hermione and Severus is gonna be like,,,and i hope Draco decides to be good....maybe he will fall in love with a muggle too. great story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat1441 on June 15, 2004
    Wow, a person spends a couple of days in the hospital and the next thing you know their favorite story is almost finished. I had to read the last bunch of chapters all at once, so this is a multi-chapter review. Lets start with oh those poor girls! Draco too, it must be awful to find out so much horrible stuff about your own father. Lucky Hermione that he's quick thinking! Now it's Ron the great defender? I'll bet Blasie regrets waking up that morning. Hope Draco gets his mother the medical attention she needs. He's already gone through alot, it'd be horrible ifendeended up having to lock her up. Great story, can't wait to read the last few chrs!rs!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 15, 2004
    I just want to cry for Hannah now...and kick Susan, but she has her own problems (Is the Ron/Susan sub-plot going to have any resolution?)
    No need to apologise and yes I was shocked I would never want an author to amend their story - I would have preferred to be prepared is all, but I survived. No more tragic miscarriages right? I eagerly await your next post. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 15, 2004
    Oh, those poor girls. And the ones the potion was meant for are still pregnant. I'm glad to see Draco appears to have come around and wants to be a good man.
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  • From ANON - christy on June 15, 2004
    this story is very good, i am happy to see that it is updated almost regularly. The story so far has been wonderful, I like Draco's new attitude, is it too late to make Draco Severus's son from Olivia, say Lucius stoled from her cause his wife was baron, just asking, seems like an idea to me, make everyone happy.
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