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Reviews for Marriage Vows

By : selened
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 15, 2004
    Great chapter. I loved how Ron defended Severus in front of the other student, and I like how Draco seems to be coming around and not being such a little bastard. Thank you for giving us such long chapters. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 15, 2004
    g cha chapters so mant twists tur turns i absolutely love it please update soon i can't wait to see what will happen next

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 15, 2004
    yay! i finally got around to reading the new chapters you put up...this story is just a phenomenal piece of work, one of the best stories i've had the pleasure of reading..please update! thanks

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 15, 2004
    Good God, warning on this chapter for pregnant readers would have been nice.

    Blaise...all dick and no brains I suppose? Very sad and scarey chapter - especially Hannah, I don't think we know her story but her choice was n awn away by Blaise and Susan's stupidity. *sigh* Draco getting more decent...maybe he too was druged(sp)? Thanks, the next chapter can't come soon enough.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 14, 2004
    Oh boy, another chapter so quick. Glad Draco was so quick on his feet. Glad the girls didn't die. But have a feeling Blaize will wish he befobefore Albus gets done with him. Can't wait for the trial. More soon please, again. :-)
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  • From ANON - Innogen on June 14, 2004
    This was an unexpected plwistwist. I'm sad that Hannah lost her baby too...I don't know what her feelings about it were though. I know Susan was flipping out, and hopfully she will still be able to conceive in the future? If Lucious Malfroy is convicted, would a third of the estates go to Severus as damages for Olivia's death and their unborn child? (If so, he could always pass that back to Draco...is he Draco's Godfather in this story?).

    Well, I can't wait for the trial. This is one involving story. Very engaging!

    Innogen
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 14, 2004
    2nd try - Well Draco was almost decent. Interesting dialogue, Hermione is just so mature (Is it the magic of the bonding?). Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Raija on June 14, 2004
    This is getting more and more interesting by every chapter you write.
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  • From ANON - Innogen on June 14, 2004
    Wow, another chapter! Your story contains both depth and complexity growing with each installment. I'm curious about how things will go with the "Baby Scandal"--Tld jld jld just tell Luna and the Quibbler to write a positive article about it....I think it would be funny if Minerva turned up pregnant too ::grin:: That binding magic must have been a powerful aphrodesiac! It looks like you still have a complicated myster to solve regarding the death of Miss Abbotts real parents...and it's nice that Draco seems to be growing up. Also, I find it interesting that Hermione is still going to teach...at least the Slytherins with behave, and Neville will be less nervous so he won't melt so many cauldrons :P
    --Innogen

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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 14, 2004
    Wonderful chapters! I really hope after all their efforts that Hermione and Severus can nail Lucius. He deserves it. Please post more soon!!
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  • From DreamAngel on June 14, 2004
    It ret recently spent the last two days reading your story... I have to say I honestly just finished the original books so it's fresh in my mind. You're story manages to keep to the characters personalities perfectly.

    Another thing, while reading I noticed you mentioned the spelling and grammer mistakes people were finding... I didn't find any myself. But being Canadian I guess the differences in Canadian/UK isn't as noticable as American/UK.

    Either way... Keep it up and I can't wait to read the rest of it.

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 14, 2004
    Love this story. Looking forward to what happens next, especially with Marie. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Raija on June 14, 2004
    I like this. Severus is bit out of character but he obviously has to be in order to the story work...so I like it. I hate out of character fics...usually.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 14, 2004
    It is amazing that you can update so quickly. Great new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 14, 2004
    It is amazing thau cau can update so quickly. Great new chapter.
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