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  • From ANON - Firestarter on June 12, 2004
    Great job. This is a very good ML fic. I especially liked the court scene. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 12, 2004
    I was really suprised when you threw in that whole lover thing between Severus and Malfoy. I really liked the chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sharon on June 12, 2004
    Love the story so far. Be interesting to see how you play out the inevitable harm Ron's jealous act will have on his friendships with both Hermoine and, to a lesser extent, Harry. I know Draco isn't going to go quietly. They still have to nail Malfoy. I'm wondering is Prof.. Martin is as innocent as he seems. Then there's the baby and the whole settlinto nto married life. So glad you hthe the whole story finished!! I' looking forward to the rest!

    Sharon
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  • From ANON - Joanna Scarlett on June 12, 2004
    I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this fic. It is very well written although seems a bit sparse to me but I suspect that this is your writing style. I have been remiss in reviewing so far and I'm sorry, I wanted to rectify that now. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 12, 2004
    Free at last, free at last! Great chapter. I'm glad Hermione got to tell off the old, greedy farts that did this to her and then tried to blame Severus. Great, great story. Can't wait for more. Soon please.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 12, 2004
    They won! squicked a little, but mostly amazed. Great chapter, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Elbereth on June 12, 2004
    I've never left a review here before but I cannot walk away from your story without saying something. It is original, interesting, intriguing, contains Severus, and is just thoroughly enjoyable to read. I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters.
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 12, 2004
    So they can finally get on with their lives, and about time too! Another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 12, 2004
    i am in love with this story! plz! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Manda on June 11, 2004
    I've noticed one main problem- identifying speakers of quotes. This happened in the earlier chapters more than in the latest ones, but I'd recommend fixing that should you choose to revise it. Some of the conversations were hard to follow. You can also use the identifications to elaborate on *how* the speaker said what they did.

    Otherwise, very good job. I'm really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Manda on June 11, 2004
    I've noticed one main problem- identifying speakers of quotes. This happened in the earlier chapters more than in the latest ones, but I'd recommend fixing that should you choto rto revise it. Some of the conversations were hard to follow. You can also use the identifications to elaborate on *how* the speaker said what they did.

    Otherwise, very good job. I'm really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on June 11, 2004
    OMG!! WOW!!!!!!!

    I've just caught up on the last four chapters!!!!! I adore this Fic!! I know I've said it before and damnit I'll say it again!! Love it!!!!

    Chapter 19 had me spitting mad!! How dare they part Severus and Hemoine!!!! I Loved when Hermione rushed to her husbands rescue!! Wonderfuly done!!

    Oh, and when they confessed their love!! I melted!!!!!!!!

    Ron, don't even get me started there he is being a PRAT!!!!!



    HERMIONE is head of Slytherin!! Love it even more!! Oh, the possibilities!!!!

    This story is Awesome and so are you!! Keep those chapters Coming!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 11, 2004
    Free Severus! Malfoy can burn in hell (Sometimes I really think I need to get a life - LOL) Thanks I'm enjoying this story.
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 11, 2004
    What a very ucky situation in the Martin family. Ewww. Lucky for Maria she won't be acknowleged by them. Glad that Molly wasn't shy about telling off Percy and Ron. Personally I can't stand Ron and my feelings wouldn't be hurt abit if something nasty were to happen to him.
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  • From ANON - Kat1441 on June 11, 2004
    Ron is an evil little toad! Hopefully this will all be straightened out now and Severus will come home. Excellent chapter!
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