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Reviews for Marriage Vows

By : selened
  • From ANON - Gina on June 11, 2004
    I have to say that this is one of the best marriage law challenges that I have read. Snaps for you! So many of them are repetitive and illogical in their development, going from
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  • From ANON - Emily on June 11, 2004
    I love how quickly you update... and I like the story... though, I must admit, even if she was in love with Severus, it's very OOC for Hermione to want to shrug off her NEWTs. I like this story so far... please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 11, 2004
    Well, I'm glad the prat confessed; but what a mess he has created! Very much enjoying your story, and looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 11, 2004
    I knew Ron that little shit had something to do with this. I would have castrated him. Thank you for updating so fast, but I'm greedy and want more. I'm wondering if Hermione will tell Severus what Binns did to her? But I think perhaps not since Severus would probably kill the bastard.
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 11, 2004
    I could be wrong, but wsn't Dumbledore restored to his position within the Wizengot at the end of OotP? So he should have little trouble dealing with this. How horrible that Severus was arrested, and what was up with that medic? Sheesh. Hopefully poor Severus will be home again soon. And Hermione will have givent the Wizengot her opinion quite nicely. Can't wait to see how this all turns out. Did I mention beforat Iat I never saw that coming for Miss Abbott? Still better his sister than his daughter!
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on June 11, 2004
    Well, I think Severus was getting ttlettle sappy (sorry I like my Snape sarcastice even when he is being nice); However, that's newlyweds for you. I thought the story was losing momentum but this last chapter blasted it back to full speed. Somehow I suspect Ron is stirring things up for Snape.
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  • From ANON - Gia on June 11, 2004
    I can't see where you have any obvious errors in the story. In fact, yours is one of the relatively few that I've read without major grammatical or punctuation errors. Many of the un-betaed stories I read on fanfiction sites make my high school English students essays read like the Bard in comparision. Please continue with the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 11, 2004
    Great new chapters. I feel sorry for Severus and Hermione. You are going great. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 11, 2004
    I love your story i can't wait to see more updates and i am dying to find out what will happen to severus and i wish you would make hermione give ron a good piece of her mind we all know she has a mean temper lol. I hope that this will eventually have a happy ending.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - Kat1441 on June 10, 2004
    Two new chapters, excellent! I haven't actually read the second one yet, I just wanted to arrrg! Now I know who she is, but what happened? You think that Lucius killed his Father? Hmmm
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 10, 2004
    I know its part of the challenge, and your idea is a very good idea at that, but awe.d hed he have to get arrested. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on June 10, 2004
    Members of the community are concerned? Ron and/or Draco wouldn't be part of that "community" would they? Looking forward to finding out, and I hope Hermione gives hell to the Wizagamont but good!
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  • From ANON - Yitzh = on March 16, 1920
    Selened, I think I've spooted what Lisa was talking about. You're using British spelling conventions. Flavour rather than flavor, ensure rather than insure, in hospital rather than in the hospital.

    Lisa, spelling and usage differ between various English-speaking nations and to me it seems appropriate to follow British conventions in a story that is set in Great Britain. You, yourself, would be well advised to take the time and trouble to use upper and lower case letters appropriately. Many people on discussion boards are offended by long posts in "all-caps" since it represents SHOUTING.

    Selened, a beautiful story.

    Yitzhak
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 10, 2004
    Great story. Hate that Severus has been arrested. Bet money at Ron had a hand in it, the creep! And Marie, glad she is related to Severus. But hate that she is part Malfoy. Really enjoy this story. Looking forward to more soon.
    As far as spelling, I haven't noticed any. Some stories I read are so bad that it is distracting. Whoever complained, did they cite examples? Or were they just bitching, maybe using their own twisted spelling as a judge?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 10, 2004
    Why do I get the sinking feeling that Ron may have also had something to do with all of this? That healer was a jerk and so were those aurors. I hope this all gets straightened out soon. I hate angsty stuff.
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