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  • From ANON - alicat on June 10, 2004
    P.S. YOU SHOULD HAVE WAY MORE REVIEWS THAN THIS, I'D BE TELLIN ALL THOSE PEOPLE OF WHO JUST READ AND MOVE ON, IT'S JUST NOT POLITE!
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  • From ANON - alicat on June 10, 2004
    I really love this fic, I just finished reading to chappie 19 from the start, bit of a long haul but I made it lol, I'm really enjoying it, your doin a great job I don't know how your spittin the chaps out so quick, I've got a bit of writers block at the mom so so I'm doin my other fav past time and browsing some stories and I'm glad I click the link for this one I have really enjoyed what you've written so far. XOXO

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  • From ANON - Phantasia on June 10, 2004
    I never would have thought of that being the case. Intresting turn of events. I cna hardly wait for more. Hopefully yol gel get to pudate before tomorrow, so I can review. I wont get to get on this weekend I will have a house company until Monday . I hope I will have a lot to read. (wink wink)

    Phantasia
    :P

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  • From ANON - auntbecky on June 10, 2004
    if you're a new writer, you're doing very well for a first try.
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  • From ANON - Kat1441 on June 10, 2004
    I haven't noticed any spelling or grammer errors. Of course, my grammer leaves alot to be desired, according to my English Comp. professor anyway, so clearly any mistakes were insignificant. Now back to the important stuff. Another great chapter! Severus never really said yes or no specifically about whether or not it bothered him that his children wouldn't be pureblood. He just rambled on about traditions... is that going to be significant? I knew Ron was going to be a problem, but at least noone can say he's not in character. I was a bit srprsed at how well everyone else was taking the marriage, but I assume their concern for Hermione over came their dislike of Snape. Pity I have to work ALL day long today, I'll not get to see any updates until tomorrow. I did mention that the curiousity was killing me right?
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  • From ANON - Lena on June 10, 2004
    nice story, I really like it! And as for errors, I could only find punctuation errors... I didn't find any spelling errors (unless my brain skipped over something I suppose..but usually I'd pick them out!) and kudos to you for doing this on your own, without a beta reader! I have nothing against beta readers (I think they're great and they can be a necessity) but the fact that you can do this without one is really great! It shows that you can be a beta reader to someone else (always a good thing! Nothing liek helping others!) and that you are indeed using edu education ;)
    Keep updating qucikly!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 10, 2004
    Jesus, Ron is being a real asshole here. I have a feeling he's going to do something stupid. Great story so far. And thank you for the speedy updates.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on June 10, 2004
    I love it! I never thought I would say that about a severus/hermione pairing either but you pulled it off so well! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon! i think you did a great job at keeping him in character ideridering this would NEVER happen in the book and they dont go into his character that much anyway. I can't wait to see who the little girls parents are though. I know someone thinks it's severus and olivias kid but I dont like that idea so much. *shrugs* but its whatever you decide. just hurry up and post it I'm DYING of curiosity!
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 10, 2004
    Great story i can't wait to see what will happen next i kind of think that it might be severus' child but how with the age difference i am not show but i can't wait to find out.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - lisa on June 10, 2004
    YOUR STORY IS GOOD BUT IN READING I AM SEEING SEVERAL ERROR IN THE STORY YOU ARE MAKING CARELESS SPELLING MISTAKES AND INCORRECT USE OF WORDS. THIS IS NOT A FLAMER BECAUSE I ACTUALLY LOVE YOUR STORY BUT I WISH YOU WOULD GET A BETA READER WHO WOULD CORRECT THOSE SILLY ERRORS FOR YOU. AS I READ THE OTHER REVIEWS I SAW THAT SOMEONE WAS OFFERING TO BETA READ FOR YOU I CAN'T REMEMBER THE NAME I THINK IT WAS RED OR OR SOMETHING I THINK YOU SHOULD TAKE UP THERE OFFER AND I HOPE THAT WHEN YOU UPDATE NEXT THEY WON'T BE SO MANY ERRORS. BUT I DO LOVE YOUR STORY SO REMEMBER THIS IS NOT A FLAMER.
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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 09, 2004
    Hmmm... see if the ages were right I'd still go with her being Olivia's daughter. It would explain alot. The muggle baby could have been what Severus had seen with his wifes body. That whole mess is too much though. Olivia would have had to have the baby, switch it and return home to be murdered. She wouldn't have done that if she didn't know ahead of time that she was about to die. And if she knew why go home? Of course this also would require her to deliberately place the muggle baby in danger by bringing it home with her. I wonder if Narcissa didn't have a baby, then switch it in order to prevent Lucius from using her in his evil plans. If he'd been planning the whole power stealing thing for 11 years that is... She could have brought the muggle baby home and let Lucius assume it was a squib.He'd probably have killed it. But I don't see Narcissa having any guiltps ops over the death of a muggle baby. The girl is too old to be Dracos. Or it could be ok I don't have any more could be's right now. By the way another great chapter! Can't wait to see how this all works out. The curiousity is killing me!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2004
    did you ever read the Fionavar Tapestry from Canadian author Guy Gavriel Kay? There is a wizard in it, Loren, who can perform magic by using a source (a volonteer who follows him).
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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on June 09, 2004
    good chapter....okay so now I'm leaning toward Lucius being the father and whoever the mother was hid her to keep her safe and/or from growing up a pureblood snob destined for servitude to the dark lord. So, I think maybe she could be Draco's half sister. At any rate, the child is too young to be Snape's and since Olivia was killed when she was only 5 months pregnant, the chances of the baby living if born, eiallially after that kind of trauma, is slim to none. Poor Abbotts -- I wonder who ended up with their real baby or if she is still alive but that's another story, LOL.
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on June 09, 2004
    WOW!! Just caught up on the last three chapters!!! What can I say other than, I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Well written, intriguing and the growing emotional ties between Hermione and Severus are truly beautiful to behold. You've done a wonderful job introducing some original characters that I can't wait to learn more about!! Fabulous! More soon I hope!! :-)


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  • From ANON - kat1441 on June 09, 2004
    Another excellent chapter! Now what did that book have to say that had everyone sooo uopset?!!! And another step closer to finding out just who Maria Abbott is... ok I'm ready for another update.
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