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Reviews for Marriage Vows

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  • From ANON - Steph on November 18, 2015
    Can you fix it up a bit.its a good story
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  • From ssdawn on October 19, 2013
    It serves him right! So glad Hermione was "quick on the draw"
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on July 31, 2013
    The format sucks. Fix it and then I would truly love to read this story
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  • From GameBrat65 on April 01, 2009
    You might want to fix this:
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  • From IceQueen82 on December 04, 2008
    I was going to read the full story before commenting however I think that the problem with refering to english mistakes or grammer issues by others is due to the server crash awhile ago. That when the story was re-uploaded that words came out mangled or missing. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to finish it but perhaps you should scan the story for these errors for example...

    The gargoyle at basebase of the -chapter one

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  • From MythDouglas on July 28, 2008
    That was really good. I can't wait for the sequel, so many things left in the air. What the prophecy says? What will Hermione do as a career? What will Draco do with his life? Are Severus and Hermione going to be Maria/Claudia's representatives in the wizarding world? It would be nice if Draco lives with Harry at Grimmuald Place for a while seeing as he is changing over to a Black and Harry is the head of the very small Black family now. Although I am sure you probably already have what you want in mind. I am glad you aren't posting until the sequel is finished, I hate getting half way though an unfinished story to not have it updated. Thank You!

    -Witch Myth
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  • From badtamperedbear on June 16, 2008
    for me i agree with what you say about "silly errors" but when downloaded there have obviously been mistaked due to that such as letters being repeated such as odayoday which doesn't make any sense but today its with most of the letters and the sentence. it really rritating for me as a reader but its nothing the authors can do anything about unfortunately. it has occured with several of( the stories which i have read.
    cubs (*_*)
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  • From chelleybelle on April 17, 2007
    I completely and totally loved this story, right up until the epiloge. It sucked!! What happend to everyone??? You left to many things unfinished and dangling...as for spelling errors, they weren't spelling errors so much as formatting and typing errors...
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  • From ANON - Morticia Heartless on August 19, 2006
    The errors I am seeing are, I think, due to computer or transfer errors in the software used by AFF. The storyb is very compelling. I like it very much.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - shannon on December 24, 2005
    its ok....i guess.....WAY toooo OOC for me tho. u make snape look like a night in shining armor!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Applekissis on December 10, 2005
    Very OOC...But this was a really good story..
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  • From ANON - Drow on February 26, 2005
    Loved it..... epilogue was a wee disapointing, but you could make it up by telling draco's story post- father... ;) Over all i highly enjoyed your story...... ohh one other thing: Ron and Susan, what happened in the end with them?
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  • From slygriff21 on December 28, 2004
    This was an awsome story! I loved all the plot twist and the back story you had. You are a very gifted writer. I can't wait to read your companion to this. I aslo can't wait to read your sequal as well. Keep up the wonderful writing.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on December 07, 2004

    Oh * swoon * This was just so wonderful I can hardly think of how to express myself. I loved every bit of this story. I laughed, I cried, I got some really major shocks and I even let out a squeal of surprise. ( First time ever from reading fan fiction!) This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It was just so well thought through and the plot twists were absolutely amazing to me. Just when I thought things were going to settle down WHAM!! Another shocker. I never saw the Severus/Lucius being lovers part coming and The Maria Abbott twist was a complete surprise ( I had been thinking something totally different there!) The pregnancy epidemic caught me off guard. The potion accident threw me for a loop and Draco's change of heart was a welcome surprise too. The death of Narcissa Malfoy and the way Hermione comforted Draco just made my heart melt. I am telling you that I have never experienced so many emotions in one story in my whole life! It was BRILLIANT!! I began reading this yesterday evening and I have read it straight through and it is now 9:30 am and I was completely absorbed in it. I never even went to bed last night! I couldn't tear myself away from it! I have read you other stories as well and I have to say I think you are probably one of the best fan fiction writers I have ever come across and I have been reading H.P. fan fiction for a couple of years. You have a rearkable talent and I sincerely hope you keep writing. I will be here to read every last bit of it. * Kudos * This one should be put in the fan fiction hall of fame. I could ( and probably will ) read this again and again. Thank you for writing this and for sharing it with the world. Jaimie
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