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Reviews for The Professor and His Pint-Sized Shadow

By : SeverelySnaped
  • From ANON - crissy on January 18, 2005
    i love that last chapter. very sweet. steamy too. but i would love to read a new chapter. this is really a great start to a fic but unless i'm very worng its not complete. very good work. :)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 18, 2005
    I'm sorry, this is going to sound harsh, but I really fucking hate it when people do this. I love this story, I adore it! But it's been months since you last posted and now this is up again and its not updated. Do you have an update? I was so excited at having a new chapter, then I see its at the same stopping point.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 18, 2005
    That was a very enjoyable chapter, I really like your Snape, he's still snarky and rude, but
    is definately becoming more "Human".
    Loved the dog and laughed at the Parrot story, my Aunt had one there was many a time I
    would have liked to banish it too!
    Please update soon,
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  • From MidnightLilly on January 18, 2005
    There isn't anything wrong with talking to dogs, I talk to mine all the time I always wonder if they'll talk back=)
    Hermione is good with Jonette, I think she and Severus will be excellent parents.
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  • From sailorpipn on January 18, 2005
    i do like this story! very well written and it makes me want to read much more!
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  • From ANON - June on January 17, 2005
    Hey, it's been four months since you updated this story! Please, where is Chapter 6???
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  • From ANON - becrenee on December 11, 2004
    the story gets really confusing.... he is finding a hair detangler and then all the sudden he is talking to someone about taking care of his neice..... something must be missing in there!
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on September 25, 2004
    What a delightful story! This is the first adoption fic I've read and it was very surprising. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on September 23, 2004
    This is an absolutely wonderful story that you've crafted. Each chapter is beautifully written, but I have to say that this last chapter and the coming together of Severus and Hermione was absolutely the most beautiful, heart-tugging, lovingly crafted that I have ever had the pleasure to read. Please keep up the good work and update soon! I can't wait to see how the story develops!
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  • From ANON - jonelin on September 23, 2004
    i've read a couple of these adoption challenge fics, and this is by far the best one! not only is it the best of that group, it is also, overall, one of my favorite fics right now. the build up in chapter five was excruciatingly beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Alanfan on September 23, 2004
    I am enjoying this story. The lemon in this last chapter was one of the best I've read for a while it was simply written and very believable, not over done and to use an old fashioned word charming. I like Snape/Hermione and children stories, among others ofrse.rse.
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  • From ANON - Fury on September 22, 2004
    Great! I like Jonette, I like how Snape slips up and is a little too harsh sometimes, and I like all the possibilities set out. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - June W on September 22, 2004
    Ch 5 - I am SO glad to see this story updated!!! They probably still need to check out the house. Will you tell us where Jonette ended up between there and the orphanage? Will "Nana" appear again? Nice to see Severus and Hermione finally get together. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 22, 2004
    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANY YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!! I have been really hoping that you were not planning to just leave this story by the wayside. I love it, and it really is such a wonderful tale. This was a wonderful chapter. I think it only natural that after having spent so much time together they would eventually begin a relationship. I like how you built up to it. I love how they have been teasing each other on occasion and I think you did a great job when they finally did have sex. I'm curious to see what Jonette's reaction will be, but I get the feeling that she already sees Hermione as a mother figure so I don't think it would be too bad. I am wondering though if she will ever call Severus Uncle at least. Maybe he has been a bit formal with her being so uncomfortablth bth being a parent, but I hope she eventually calls him something other than Professor.

    Please don't keep us waiting too long for another installment, or I'll have to track you down.
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  • From ANON - orlando Switch on August 15, 2004
    Your story is really adorable and I do hope you'll update soon!!! I especially like all moments when Jonette starts giggling because of one of Severus' remarks, while it's for him completely illogical what is so funny about his statements. This is such a nice clash of two worlds.... And I do agree with one of the other reviewers it might be a good thing to visit the Snape manor with her. It might be an opportunity for both of them to find peace with the past, and if he takes miss Granger with them, it might be also an opportunity for him to show her a different and more personal side of himself.
    There were just two minor things confusing me: in their first encounter Snape found out Jonette had ice blue eyes, while when looking at her in her new room he thinks of her having the same dark eyes and hair as his. So what is it? I personally prefere her having black hair and eyes, but it's your story...
    And the second thing: in the fist chapter Snape somewhere says (or thinks) 'Jesus' while I hardly can believe he is a christian. But apart form this small things this is really a beautifull and believable story and I am more than curious to read the further developments. Hope you dont' let us all waiting too long for that..
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