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Reviews for The Professor and His Pint-Sized Shadow

By : SeverelySnaped
  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 09, 2004
    Sweet...in a scarey Severus is a dad kind of way. Hermione is going to be great! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - TobiasX on June 09, 2004
    Brilliant story so far, looking forward to seeing what happens with Snape, Hermione and Jonette. Good luck :)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 09, 2004
    I just ADORE this story! I love how you have made Jonette a smaller version of Hermione. I also like how Severus swallowed his pride and asked her for help. I check this site several times a day just hoping for an update from you. You're so nice to give us such long chapters but they aren't long enough as far as I'm concerned. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Titania on June 09, 2004
    I went YAY! (Really) when I saw that you had posted another fic. I really like this one so far, I can see Snape as a daddy! You've kept him so in charater-even when asking for Hermione's help.

    sniff sniff~ do I smell a potential romance in the air? :)

    Live long and prosper!
    Titania
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on June 09, 2004
    i think that was more in character for snape. he was curt and snippy and commanding (in a snarky kind of way), just like we all know and... something (love or hate, take your pick). jonette is a very precocious little girl. she's very cute and endearing. i liked all the questions and the banter between snape and her. i found it really funny when she mentioned that she could bend her finger in such a way. that exchange was funny. deranged indeed. however, her reaction to hermione was a bit suspect. would a traumatized little girl really be so forward. in my experience, most children shy away from strangers. they don't even wave or say hi when first introduced. i'll let it slip though since i really like hermione myself. she's a sweetie.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on June 09, 2004
    I can almost picture Jonette.....this story is so cute....I was hoping that you would of included Hermione and Jonettes' interaction in this chapter.....it would be interesting to of read of the Gyffindors reaction to Hermione and her "mini Hermione" its just so cute......please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Savannah on June 08, 2004
    -sniffle- I want to cry. That is so sweet. You totally rock the casba at writing, and I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - Expected Aberrance on June 08, 2004
    I really like what you've done with this challenge. I'm looking forward to seeing it develop. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on June 08, 2004
    AWW! That was sad, but beautiful! The poor little sweetie! And poor Snape having to explain that her parents weren't coming back... Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Imp on June 08, 2004
    That was really sweet, but sooooo sad. I loved it.
    Happy Writing!

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  • From ANON - rubberduck on June 08, 2004
    it's hard to be critizing and praising at the same time, but that's how i feel. i really liked this second chapter. it was very sweet how snape handled the little girl. i liked how he picked her ud cad carried her to hogwarts. i liked how he realized that his teacher's tone wouldn't be good. i didn't like how much he was out of character though. the fact that he got teary eyed as he talked to jonette wasn't very believable. not with his background. also, the fact that he hugged her and kissed her was not in line with his personality either. it would have been better if he was very stiff and awkward in his physical contact with jonette. a sweet little girl would bring out his paternal instincts and they should, but in my opinion it would have been slightly more believable if those things had of been worked in over time. let jonette (and later hermione) break him down to that kind of thing. still, you're writing is quite good and i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 07, 2004
    Great chapter. I felt terrible for Jonette. It is so very hard to tell a child that age about death, and you did a great job with her not being able to comprehend. I'm looking forward to reading more. Severus is going to have to learn some major patience here.
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  • From ANON - Imp on June 07, 2004
    Now thats just bloody cute!!! I also must compliment you on your choice of story title. It definitely caught my attention. I look forward to reading more.
    Happy Writing!

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  • From Fish on June 07, 2004
    WOO! YEAH! *punches air* Daddy Sev! Haha, wow... this is great! Is there more to come?

    WOO! Looking forward to more!

    Ciao,
    Fish
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  • From CaseyL on June 06, 2004
    AW! How sweet. That was very, very good and I can't wait for more.
    ~iola_83
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