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Reviews for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

By : KaliDiah

From ANON - Loki on August 31, 2005
Woohoo, I got a kiss! Merci beaucoup, ma belle. And as to the story - wow, just, wow. WOW! I suppose it would be bad of me to immediately start hounding you for the next chapter, but hey, addicted here. This is fantastic *watches sex bracelet plot unfold* and I'm even getting used to the Draco/Blaise aspect *hides H/D shipper flag under bed*. Looking forward to finding out what Spike and Angel have been upto whilst Draco and Blaise are playing and Xander's melding and Dawn's blushing...the Narcisssa aspect is also *verrrrry* interesting...Amazing as always,

~Loki

P.S. Oh yeah, and I've had your story in my recommended reading section bit since I first found it lol, so I could spot the updates as soon as they came!
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From ANON - Deadwrite on August 25, 2005
ha ha ha that was funny and thanks that answers alot of questions i had but heres one that makes me think i may be reading just a little too much into the worlds but here it is you know that in a buffy episode called "smashed" i think it was when near uber witch willow uses her power with the apple computer to hack into police records , now does this ability in conjuction with the fact that now shes all white haired uber witch wont it leave the new computers at hogwarts open as free game or will the have a magic firewall prob wont do much cuz will is still a superb hacker anyway oh yah this ep is my fav because spike finally comes off the chip.
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From ANON - Silver1 on August 20, 2005
once again, love it love it love it! Have re-read this chapter again! and like where it's going. the "dream" sequence in the garden with Cedric? I am assuming the others that Cedric is talking about are Angel and his crew. But what of the part of harry hearing his mother's voice tell him she trusts them?? did she ever meet any of them or has she just been keeping an eye out? I am also curious about how Xander will do when he meets the Hyena personality and how that will change him. also how it will change how others see him, especially Remus. my only gripe?? When is the next update!!!! It has been over a month since the last chapter, and I need my story fix! Waaah! okay, being quiet now.....
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From ANON - Silver on August 18, 2005
I LOVE you!!! ....No, wait...I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!!! That's it! It is sooo detailed. It's sorta dark like I like, but still makes me feel good when I read it! I'm so very happy that everyone is acting mature. A diet of too much angst makes me sick. Oh, I don't know if you covered this already, but what does Draco taste like? If Angel is peaches, Harm is sugar, and Spike is cinn. it makes me curious for other flavors. Thanks!!!
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From ANON - Sora on August 17, 2005
hay losser.

ure fic's not ghei enuff.

(;D)
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From ANON - Sami on August 16, 2005
ok i know ive complained a few times now..and ill have to start off saying that there are def parts of your story that i do enjoy...it has a great plot....although do u really have to make everyone gay? i mean cmon why couldnt draco get some female loving..and xander? wuts next? snape and giles? o god im putting ideas into ur head
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From ANON - sami on August 15, 2005
wuts with u and making great characters from buffy and harry potter into just bad people...i mean cmon....dumbledore? ur off ur bird
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From ANON - Sami on August 15, 2005
how in the world is buffy self absorbed...she gave her life to save the world not to mention gave up so much of her life to protect complete strangers
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From ANON - Stephanie on August 07, 2005
Gurl, when r u gonna update? Hurry it up! lol
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From ANON - warconq on July 19, 2005
YEAH! UPDATE! Gah! ( That is a fun word.) mad props to you cause it is really, REALLY hard to do a connective chapter. Rolling all the inner stories together is really hard and this chapter is great. Although I have to say that the beginning was a big tease. Shame, shame on you. I am so glad you brought the Lupin/Xander thing up agian. I'm so excited this is the only story that ever explored that pairing but I think that maybe we need to kind a lovely young girl for Harry too. Maybe a sibling of the slayer. Hint! Hint! Just an idea.

OH! And I have to tell you something that will just give you warm fuzzies for days. I was so taken by your earlier chapters explaining the ritual to becoming part of the Order that I bought a Zambien Emerald ring from Home Shopping Network because it reminded me so much of your story. How's that for a compliment! Your story had such an effect on me that I bought expensive jewelry that reminds be of it. That and it was a freaking gorgeous ring. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
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From ANON - coyo on July 17, 2005
*squeals and gives kali a long, hard, steamy kiss* i love you! you updated! you made my YEAR! yay!

Anyway, construtive critism. (well, i'll try.) As mentioned before, I love this fic with all my little heart. Lovely. hmm, got this absolutely insane idea from reading this, Severus/Lucius, lots and lots of angst, a loveless marriage, a dearly loved son, more angst.... I gotta start writing. NEE-WAY! I wanted to see more sex, poo. Loved the part with Petunia, and the ring sounds absolutely beautiful. And about Sev, pretty please make him gay. PLEASE! *gets down on her knees and begs* please make my beloved sevvie gay. He just doesn't fit with ANY of the girls in the story nor any of those NOT in the story. Come to think of it, he doesn't exacly fit with the guys either. Is Wesley single? Wesley/Severus maybe. And now I'm getting mental images. naughty! The deram-sequence with Cedric was gorgeous. Wow!
logging off now, tons of kisses, coyo.

ps. Maybe Percy? For Severus, I mean.
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From ANON - Dassani on July 16, 2005
Woot!! Muse is awesome! *^^* It is so friggin' cute! A want one... Oh, and who are you planning to pair Harry with? Make it something slashy would you! That'd make my day, what with the Ron reactions that are bound to come of that!! ^.~* Good luck and update soon!

Hugs&Serpents'Kisses ~DASSANI
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From ANON - stephanie on July 15, 2005
YEAH! New chappie! DAMN AWESOME as always! And yes, it is the same Stephanie who left those 3 reviews! :)
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From ANON - tp on July 14, 2005
OMG!! A new chapter, yes!! I lurv this story. I really like the way the romances are going so far, fun and sexy. I SO knew xan and remy were gunna hook it up. They should add some oz goodiness in too, where's he at i wonder? i love the xander freak over a female hyena, too great and spot on characterization. draco and blaise are so cute, and the sex it hott. they are such sexy, hot males, i think anyone would want them, what's not to like? i like the planning session in the bedroom, and how there was no sex in it, shows the boys can be serious too. they are slytherins after all, it's not all just fun and bunnies. unless it's the monty python bunny, he rocks. i am super looking forwards to harry getting tips from the slyths on how to manage his cooler half. still looking forwards to the coming action at hoggy-warts school of magic and mayhem. you have any of the other books from the story that you wrote up on a website? and all the talk of a three arc story is driving me nuts! i wanna read it all now. really. here's cookies and butterbeer to your muse, so get on writing you wonderful author you.
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From ANON - Aimee on July 14, 2005
Geez, haven't seen my name dropped like THAT in ages. In response (in the order I recall them)...

Snape- MINE!!! Oh wait, for the story... hmmm... I have an idea, but we'll have to talk, Miss Kali.

Brownies - Or cheesecake. Or cheesecake brownies. Or brownie cheesecake. Really I'm not picky.

Draco Aiden Malfoy - not bad, but I have a suggestion for that.

Kali's pixel art, books, etc - Seriously folks. I thought I was OCD. Heh, ain't got nuttin' on Kali. She's INSANE with the pixels and the details that I have no clue where there all gonna go.

Website- oh, yeah. That. Needs some coding and Kali needs to make some decisions about colors, etc.... Because she's a detail whore. Um, I WOULD promise it up by the end of the week, but HBP should arrive on my doorstep sometime Saturday morning, and the ONLY person who should distrub me whilst reading would be Snapie-chan.

Draco as Gemini - to be honest, I said either May 21 or June 4. So, I'm a bit depressed about THAT. Seriously. But yeah, there was NO question Dearest Draco was a Gemini. I could have told ya'll that years ago.

Muse- I LOVE Muse. She's cute. I want one of my own. Or Snape. I'll take Snape.... And NO, I'm not fixated.

Kali- While she MAY be deviant, all the good stuff was my idea. I swear. Well, most of it, anyhoo. And another wonderful chapter, Kali Darling.
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