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Reviews for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

By : KaliDiah

From ANON - Manfred on May 31, 2005
Of all the things that people could ask, I know i push it when i ask, what is going to become of the group when dumbledore gets around them? Though it seems that is going tobe told later on, dumbledore being a more twisted and controlling person than he is played out to be in J.K.'s books... it makes one sit back and just think of how horrible people can get, event when they have good outcomes in mind... but it seems.. as many chapters as this is late, is dumbledore going to pressure them harder than before while they are in the school?
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From ANON - Matt on May 31, 2005
Will Connor be involved in this fic at all or is he going to stay without his memories forever?
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From ANON - warconq on May 31, 2005
Yes it is a jewel! And I am so glad you updated I have been pineing over this story for-ever. I'm really glad that you had Draco and Harry make up and you did a masterful job of them making up too. You really do have a talent for this sort of thing you know. I really hope to see some Lupin and Harris action soon. I love the character Xander and it only makes sense that he just hasn't meet the right guy yet for things to fall into place. I was hoping that you would also do a chapter of the other side. Get a little heads up as to what Willow, Buffy and you know who are up to. I just hope that Willow is just going to suck Voldie dry or possibly may him her slave but it is your little world and I'm just hanging on for the ride. Well I think I've dropped enough hints to last me a life time. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
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From ANON - tp on May 30, 2005
Finally!! I loved it all! Well worth the wait. And I totally sympathize about the whole computer thing, mine has just died as well. So sad, oh well. Glad you got yourself a new working one, yea. I loved, loved, Draco being able to tell the twins apart. That whole partnership is going to be awesome. Having them work with Fred will be kool, too. I also love how you resolved the potter-malfoy fued so simply. Very kool. Can't wait to read that money exchange on the train scene. And Muse sounds so cute, can't wait to see what special powers she has? Nev was sweet too, like always, I don't really see him and Harry as more than best friends though. And who to hook Harry up with??? He's gunna be a women preferer, huh? Not Ginny please! They always struck me as more the best friends than lovers. I like her and Nev tho, they'd balance out. But I KNOW I'll love it however you choose b/c you are awesome. Can't wait for the next update.

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From ANON - auroraluciole on May 30, 2005
Ok... let me just say that this fic is addictive. I found it just the other day because of it being updated and ... wow! I couldn't stop reading it. So now I'm all caught up. Hooray!
I love it to pieces.
I noticed that you had said that you were looking for a suggestion for Draco's middle name... my suggestion is Aiden. It's of Celtic origin and means fiery. I think that suits Draco sometimes. He definately has passion to him. Plus, Draco Aiden Malfoy just has a ring to it. Don't you think?
If your still letting people know of updates would you please add me to the list.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!

~Rora
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From ANON - Lillia on May 30, 2005
Bloody brilliant, one of the best fics I've read on the site. Interestingly, the Dumbledore bashing and the Ron bashing seem to be mutual in loads of the fics I've read. but I love the new insights you have on the characters. Can I just say, you are wonderfully deviant! More please!
Lillia
xxxxx
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From ANON - Ferfer on May 29, 2005
Woo. I had wondered earlier where this fic had gone, and I'm happy to see it back. Glad things are getting a little more settled. This is a wonderful fic and I can't wait for the updates (well, ok, I can wait, but I don't wanna ;) )

Thanks for another wonderful chapter!
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From ANON - Sakya on May 29, 2005
Hey, you're back. Good to have a new chapter (and they are going back to Horgwarts!) Well, not now, but soon.

Yes, yes, yes.

I hope you post another chapter soon. Glad to have you back.
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From ANON - EscagirlUK on May 29, 2005
Cool. And yay for Harry and Draco making friends. Death to Dumbledore. Write more, good job!
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From ANON - Tinkerhell on May 28, 2005
Yay you updated!!!*does happy dance* and it was areally fun chapter too!! I was just curious about theD/H/B but I can see how that won't work. Moving on...Yay more Neville...I like Neville can't wait for when they find out about their new training and their new space, and not to mention thier new teachers!!OH I like Fred and George too and how much fun are sex toys come on now!! that was brillant. I completely understand not writing out every sex secene the storied be way to long and lose some of the plot but please say you'll write more about"Wicked Games" and someone, anyone testing the products,Oh and Fred,Fred,and George that meeting should fun as well.What else...oh right... Ginnys a little fangirl that was cute as was muse.I'm really glad that Harry not only got along with Draco and Blaise but could hold his own in the conversation.Though I too am easily swayed by the promise of cookies especially big ones.I guess thats about it, keep up the Fabulous work and Please Please Please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Willow5552001 on May 28, 2005
First of all thank you for the update.

I LOVE this story, it's one of my favorites, and I look for updates everyday. I'm in love with your characters, they are so funny and at the same time sirious. I'm looking forward to a new update soon. Thanks again.

Willow
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From ANON - Silver1 on May 27, 2005
Wahoo!!! good to see you back! I was beginning to wonder.... So sorry about your p.c. My own was deceased for 10 days. We came back from vacay and it had crashed. I like the new relationship between Harry and Draco/Blaise. And I adore the fact that Neville seems to have more depth to him in this chapter than we normally see. That whole bit about Fred & George selling sex toys - and Draco/blaise's reactions was absolutely priceless! Am looking forward to how the twins interact or react with Angel's Fred, as well as more Xander/lupin interaction. I didn't like Ron's reaction to the snogging session, but I guess all can't be sweetness and light. And is draco really going to do something to those "sex bracelets"? Will Blaise become a member fo the Order of Angelus?
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From ANON - Vigilante on May 27, 2005
When i saw the update i almost had a heart attack! I was so just not prepared for there to be an update this time around after checking so often before! Yet again very good! I love the twins, you wrote them very well, the alternating speech thing was always very cool in my opinion...and sexy hehe...Now that we know Harry will definately be growing up and maturing, is the same going to happen for our poor little homophobic Ronnikins? I have got to say, he angered me very much in this chapter, and his first one in the story no less! I have developed a very unhealthy obsession with Ron recently...I have no idea where it came from, but I suspect it was because I read this fic that had a slightly different take on his personality... the parts that were in his POV were so funny, much like an insecure, sceptic yet relaxed comical teen with a very psuedo-eloquent way of expressing himself...in his thoughts that is, but on the outside he was a spluttering clumsy guy (I can't remember the name of the story, if I did I would give it to you now, I think you would really enjoy it)...also, in this story, he started out much like the Ron you have written here on the surface...though he wasn't homophobic, that has always seemed more of a stuffy Percy trait to me. So becaues I have this little obsession now, I hope to see that he'll get a good wakeup call and he and Hermione realize what jerks they were, though unknowingly. Mind you, I still love Draco, but I guess you could say that on my list of Harry Potter boys that I luuuurve so much, Ron has moved up in the ranks to a VERY close second, and right now I'm actually considering giving up on favorites and just going for a tie between the two...
Ok moving on...I can't wait to see how the twins work with Fred...is everyone going to have to call her Fred one and the twin Fred: Fred two? I could just see it now: the twins and Fred working in a lab at different work stations and Fred B says: Fred!
Fred W: yeah?
Fred B: where is the microscope?
Fred W: dunno Fred! Check the other room!
George: O.O...
Okay then, until next time! Tootles!
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From ANON - meirta on May 27, 2005
This was such a wonderful suprise to see this updated, I had thought this might have been an abandoned story. I loved the line about "come to the dark side we have cookies." I try and bribe people with cookies all the time so it really amused me. Can we have more vampires next chapter? Wonderful chapter, just brillant (brillant must be said in the voice of the Guiness commercial guys).
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From ANON - ravenfrog on May 23, 2005
I don't know how I missed this story before but it's very good and I can't wait for more. You've handled the crossover issues well, and I like how many characters you've been able to bring into the mix.
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