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Reviews for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

By : KaliDiah

From ANON - Silver1 on April 25, 2005
Great story, Still! I am on pins and needles ( ouch they hurt!) waiting for the next chapter or 2 or 3...... I would like to see more on the relationship between remus and xander. There was some mention of remus teaching xander things he learned from Oz, if I recall correctly. and more with Dawn, please! I would like to see her paired up with somebody. I know this is about Dumbledore's machinations, but I would like to see a little more wiht the Scoobies. Will they be running into Buffy, willow and that lot anytime soon? Anyway, keep up the good work! I am going away on vacation Tomorrow, so here's hoping you will be able to update by the time I get back! Yes, I know how difficult and distracting it is to get a new place to live. Best wishes, and update soon please!
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From ANON - deadwrite on April 13, 2005
your story brings new life into both worlds paying so much omage to them i think you should be hailed as a queen but i have one comment whens the next update
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From ANON - lanna on April 06, 2005
hey, i wanted to drop another reivew and say that i am still reading and still loveing the story.
still waiting to see how hermione and harry and ron and all them work their way in,
maybe a little action for xander with a 'normal' woman, maybe hermione?
but over all just wanted to read more,

lanna

lanhar04@hotmail.com
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From ANON - Theatre Chick on March 18, 2005
Absolutely LOVE this story! I LOVE your Spike as well. He truly fulfills his marshmallow quotient in this fic. Just as a suggestion: What about a Draco/Hermione/Harry triangle? I think that would be fun. Or maybe Draco/Hermione/Harry/Neville? This is the best HP/BtVS crossover I have ever read. I also love the focus on Xander this chapter. He and Spike are my favorite BtVS characters.
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From ANON - warconq on March 16, 2005
Oh, I think your planning an unusual pairing that intregies me. Possibly a Neville/Harry pairing. That is so unexpected or maybe it is because you're not planning it. So may facets to this delicate and beautiful jewl. I can wait patiently for you to update but only because it's you. Feel special because you are and so is your writing. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
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From ANON - adoxerella on March 13, 2005
I'm sorry to hear that RL is not of the good. I have a move coming up to and I'm not looking forward to it either. As for this chapter, WHEEEEE!!! It was SO worth the wait. Snarky Severus, my boys being ornery, Draco and Blaise goodness, and Harry FINALLY learning the score. I'm quite eager to see how he reacts to the true scope of the events of the summer. Finally, I have to say, I adore you for what you've done for poor Neville. I have quite the soft spot for him, and I love what you've done for him here. An 'O' in potions, yay! And becoming close to Harry...ahem, do I sense something deeper developing *cough*H/N*cough* I look forward to his reactions as well. I shall leave you with this quesiton though, what the hell is up with Ron and Hermione...is it Dumbledore being eval, or is there something more afoot? Enquiring minds want to know.
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From ANON - tp on March 13, 2005
Hey! You are so awesome. Hopefully Cissa can help the group out, be an insider spy type? Some Draco/Blaise action, very nice, they were so cute! I love you/I love you too!! AWE, and I was really surprised (in a good way) when Harry's aunt suddendly went all nice. It is so uber-kool that you have the ability to take a complete shocker of an idea and make it totally work for you! The revelations to Harry by Moony about DD's evilness was very well done. The whole inner Harry part was well done. I generally have trouble with how most people write Harry, it's hard to have him be a shining light good guy without making him a complete, wish he had died, prat. But so far you've done wonderful! and in a way I didn't forsee, good job. Now, on to more shopping!!!! I loved the Draco shopping before, now I wanna see more! and interactons with Weaslys would be awesome (I am havin twins withdrawl here), and you promised a pet!! Well, i figure you've heard me prattle on long enough, looking forwards to your next update =D
tp
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From ANON - Ferfer on March 12, 2005
Yay! An update. I'm sorry to hear about the house situation, but happy that you'll be in a new place soon. And what better way to celebrate a new place than lots of updates? :) No? Well, at least I tried. Another great chapter, and I'm happy to see Blaise and Harry. I'll try to patiently wait for the update, but no promises :)
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From ANON - Tinkerhell on March 11, 2005
Yay you updated!!!First off Happy Birthday!!!Sorry all you'll be geating from is this review T__T anyways another great chappie though I am dissapointed that we missed out on Draco and Blaise's "reunion" as it were, unless it's going to be in the next chapter;) I love Blaise I don't really know why seeing as he's a completely fanon based character, maybe it's because due to one of the first discriptions I ever read of a male Blaise I now always picture him as Kiba from Wolf's Rain whom in my opinon is the most delicious bishounen ever created thus providing a completely delicious Blaise to put with the utter perfection that is Draco-by the way what is his middle name?-Malfoy(God bless Fanon)!!! Going completely off on a tangent here but will there be any Blaise/Hermoine/Draco cause lately I've noticed when Draco has Blaise Hermoines usually not far behind and I rather like this ship and as I saw some one note before, sometimes it's good to see a little hentai in a story not that I'm saying anything against slash cause trust me I'm not I am an abid fan girl! I know this came out of nowhere but I tend to be a very random and flighty person hence the obssesion with Tinkerbell, Thanks by the way!!! I am very intrigued by the Narcissa plot twist it'd be nice if Draco got his mommy back even if he is already dead.It also now makes sense why Lucius didn't wait to bring Narssia into hiding with him.I also like your evil Dumbledore I've read ED once before and it was the squickyiest thing I have ever read which includes not only a cannablism but also a Weiss Kreuz Farfarello/Schu story where Farf did something to a nun that I had to re-read three times to be sure I had read it right before I totally squicked out(she was never going to bear god's child again.If you read WK you'll undoubtedly understand if you don't well just Know that Farf yurns to make God cry) again randomeness I know sorry... anywhoo rather enjoyed the reintroduction of Harry though I am an angst whore,I really Really like your postive strong Neville, He's another character I like for god knows what reason,but I do.I enjoy when he's givin a strong characterisation and hopefully we'll see more of him.Looking out for interaction between the recently dead Malfoy and the Golden Trio espeacially Harry, Smut(in general), and for some reason I'm anxious to see how Muggle Studies with Prfoessor Summers and the intro of the Sex braclet phenomenon to Hogwarts will go. So there you have it, a long Random and hopefully positive review for the birthday girl hope this makes up for my lack of a presant or at least amuses you. I'll be looking out for your next update!!!!!!!
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From ANON - LissaRiddle on March 11, 2005
ohhhh! tricky tricky woman! now get on with it I wan't to know what happens when they get to school! Get to the ggod parts will ya!!!!!*winks*
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From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on March 11, 2005
Yay! Soon I hope.
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From ANON - Vigilante on March 11, 2005
Lol, thanks, he is a sexy beast....at least he is in my head, Tom Felton doesn't do much for me =/ ...anywho, something caught my attention:
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From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on March 11, 2005
Loved the chapter! And Harry was finally in it! I wasnt saying you have to kill one of the cute boy vamps! Nooo dont kill the cute ones!! Just kill Harmony instead no one loves her *evil smile*!!! Oh and thanks for adding me to the list to know when you update!! And thank god or I would of never know you updated!!! Cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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From ANON - Tinkerhell on March 04, 2005
This story is Fabulos!!!! I love it!!! Draco is my absolute favorite and I really like all the sneaky little coincidences that tie them all togther. I'm really looking forwad to when the Golden trio get involved and while I love Blaise/Draco I was wondering if there is going to be any Harry/Draco since they're bound togther an all. I've never read an Angel/Spike fic before and have decided I rather like them as well as the Remus/Xander that seems to be developing (or is that just me).Can't wait for your next update and more of Draco and Dawn shopping, wouldn't it be hilarius if Draco bumped into Hermonie in muggle London in a Claire's no less. Anyway I will be in sheer agony untill you update again so please PLEASE please update soon!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - kazhdu on February 26, 2005
I absolutely love your story ! The rituals are well made, and everything is believable. You must be the first one to make Dumbledore a not-so-good-after-all man
and I think it's bloody brilliant ! After all, originality is the key word to an interesting fanfic, or any story for that matter.
I do wonder though, if any of the girls will be having sex. I personnaly am female, and though I enjoy reading male on male sex, it starts to look as if only
the men have sex and girls hardly think about it. (Except for Harmony, but it went with the whole ceremony and being a vamp thing)
So will there be any male-female sex ? (Or M/F/M or F/F or F/M/F, wathever) I personnaly think that the image of two platinum blond Malfoy vampires fornicating
with a brunette slavic vampire slayer is quite enticing.
Anyway, it was great reading time, and I impatiently await the next chapter !

P.S. Please excuse any grammar, vocabulary or spelling errors you will probably find. English is not my native tongue.
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