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Reviews for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

By : KaliDiah

From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on February 17, 2005
*snickers* You shifty? Never! It is cool that it wont be a Harry/Draco, cause I am kinda sick of H/D, I like H/D, but that doestn mean it doesnt get overdone. You have the only story where I actually like Angel, cause normally I dont. *smiles* I am an avid Buffy/Spike shipper and while I dont like the fact that Buffy went bad/stupid, I also understand that she cant always be good in the stories....I am not one of those people who flame for retarded reasons like that. If I dont like the fact that something in the story goes a way I dont like, (like Harry/Ginny or Harry/Ron - I utterly despise the pairings) I just stop reading the story. I am glad that Harry and the Twins are making an appearance soon. Oh yeah, thank you for explaining the gelly braclet thing cause I didnt know that....and I wear a crapload of the things in lots of different colors...some even mixed colors. The sad thing is my little sister knew...I just never bothered to ask her. She is only four years younger then me....I feel really old now. Anyway I hope you update soon, cant wait to see the next chapter.
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From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on February 17, 2005
Kool so I am not the only Buffy freak!!!! But I cant believe you know all that stuff about it! Damn I must of been close with my guess on how to kill them! I guess we will have to wait to see one of them died! I cant wait to hear all the things about the jelly bracelets!! I wear those things and I didnt know what you where talking about!!! I cant wait to see more shoping in the next chapter! Would you mind emailing me when you post the next chapter! So I will know it is posted . . . Please!!!!! Hoping you post the next chapter soon!
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From ANON - EscagirlUK on February 15, 2005
...Sex bracelets? God, American's are sooooo weird! Anyways, wasn't that chapter kinda short? Hurry and write more! I want some Harry!
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From ANON - tp on February 15, 2005
Hi! Lovely to hear from you again. I like this chapter! So fun, it's finally shopping time!! Yippee!...ok, moving on. Mrs. Malfoy is trippin me out, very plotty move making her all loving, I can't tell if she is for reals or settin something up. Also in that scene, I LOVE snarky Snape! That man has such a capacity for dark/sarcastic humor, and you write him so well. His thoughts through the whole meeting were SO funny. I am now all intrigued about this Draco ritual thingy, evil dark lord leave poor hottie boy lone! Oh, but it makes things so FUN and I love a story with Draco as main character (Potter tends to be WAY too goody-goody and I just wanna upside his head most times, I mean the boy has NO common sense, or a death wish). AND then...SHOPPING! yeah! I've been waiting for this for ages, and I must say it was so worth it, just from the shoty bit I read so far. You rock. I love the D/D friendly snarking conversation, and the pep-talk was just so sweet. Sex bracelets! Oh how I remember my jellies fondly, so eighties. It will be so cool for Draco to start up a wizardized version of a muggle sex game, lol. I am very curious who he gets to help...Also, I so agree that Linkin Park so fits Draco! the lyrics to some of those songs were made for that boy. And having him fix the electronics problem would be kool (oh the plot points possible there). Ok, now that I have yammered on for ever I will go now, still looking forwards to more shopping and an appearance soon by the twins??? Please?!
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From ANON - Dassani on February 15, 2005
(is to lazy/tired to log in sry, it's 5AM gimme a break people) Oh oh!! *jumps around excitedly* I like War's idea!! *^^* Put Fred and Faith together!! Fred is such a cutie!! And sorry about the not reviewing thingy, it's my busy season and my classes are being pains in the hind areas! ^.~* Anywho, good luck with looking up Xan's other gender, and I'd love to see him hook up with Lupin!! Oh, what fun that would be! *^^* You have to update soon, please and thank you!!

Hugs&Serpents'Kisses ~Dass
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From ANON - Vigilante on February 14, 2005
LOL, that was a great scene, i agree connor at the end of angel was awesome, but his memories were fake, that was the only thing that threw me off, i mean...eh, whatever. I am weird. what was it you thought that you were the only one who says "that" anymore? the "breath of fresh air"...oooo i know what you mean, i haven't met anyone who uses that phrase in... well..never. And the artist thing...? Ah...I have been working on my interpretation of Draco to put on sanguinus tria, and some other pics too, maybe, of angel and spike and all that good stuff, but my Draco interpretation is just...not coming out right at all, I can't get him how I damn want him! GAH...okay...anywho, ive also been thinking of doing a totally digital pic of him...or a painted one...(as you may have noticed my obsession is beyond obsession it is beyond fanaticism, if that is a word...basically im disgustingly, obscenely and horrendously obsessed with the god that is draco malfoy) erm, i do have one question: is draco only into guys or does he swing both ways...? okie then till next chappie, ill try to get that pic up for you soon!
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From ANON - LissaRiddle on February 14, 2005
i forgot to mention that those are two of my favorite bands.
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From ANON - LissaRiddle on February 14, 2005
I hold you not responsable. and I once again remind your muse to getta musin' before I am forced to delive immence pain apon him!*smiles her usual sweet smile*
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From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on February 05, 2005
Great cahpter!!!!! Wow you really know your buffy stuff and hp stuff!! Eather that or you did a lot of looking up stuff to know all that stuff from both shows! I am impressed!! I can only think of two ways to kill these vamp after what you explained! One is lighting them on fire! Or cutting off there head and then staking them (which ever one you want to do first)! Wow Xander and Lupin got alone really well! I cant wait to see the shopping trip! And I wonder who is all going to be going with them???? Cant wait to read the next chapter!
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From ANON - warconq on February 04, 2005
I am glad that Zander looks like he's might be a bad ass in this cause ever with out the extra stuff you incorperated he could so take on anyone. And do I sense maybe a little slashyness from Lupin and Zander. I hope. I hope. And get Fred and Faith together too. Fred's just so cute. I will wait paiently for your next chapter. ((^^))
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From ANON - Silver1 on January 30, 2005
Yay! one more chappie! I really liked the interaction b/w Lupin and Xander. I always felt there was more to Xander's character than what was shown, and I like the fact that we are getting an in depth look at some of his "indner workings" I especially enjoyed Remus' reaction to the name Ethan Rayne - he snarfed the drink! So, his 2 slvs are going to merge...that should be intersting. BTW will Xander be paired up with anybody? and no, I do not mean Faith. Not REmus either-that seems to be more of a "brother" type relationship, or just really good friends. and Xander seems to be straight. Dawn seems a littel young...and he has always thought of her as a little sister anyway. Perhaps one of the students at Hogwarts? Xander/Hermione? Xander/ Ginny Weasley? Oaky, I'll stop now. You have stated that this will be the first part of a trilogy; can you give a hint as to how many more chapters this part will be ? Update soonest pls!
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From ANON - Vigilante on January 28, 2005
dude, i forgot to put in my last review the stuff I'd like to see at hogwarts! Ok, so, you said an art class...? DUDE, as an artist I feel just giddy at the idea, I always knew J.K. Rowling was forgetting something important about education even for young wizards, we all need creativity in our lives. Gym class was always missing but i guess that would be taken care of with the fighting classes that angel and co. will be teaching...omg, there should be a math class, and fred should teach science, oooh and english class too...well those classes might take away from the magical feel, i dunno, just...how can they go into the world without knowing math...or writing and reading skills...? or did they all learn that before hogwarts...? Beats me...maybe an area studies class, one that concentrates on other cultures, oh and language would be cool too, like Italian...well that's all I can think of right now...till next time!
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From ANON - LissaRiddle on January 28, 2005
tell him that it is him rather then i who need to 'bring it'. and also tell him to get a move on with to musing. my patience is not vast. lyl for the post.
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From ANON - FlashBang on January 28, 2005
Yay!

I was hoping for some Blaise/Draco! I just can stand H/D to be honest. Perhaps it has something to with Harry being the hero, kinda like Buffy.

I love your story, even though i just started reading it (2 days ago), but you have to be careful with the whole lets-change-hogwarts-thing. It can easily become too much and unnecessary for your brilliant story. It doesn't mean i'll stop reading your story, but it's very unrealistic.

I can't wait for your next chapter

-FlashBang
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From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on January 28, 2005
I don't read reviews, and while I do read the AN's and review responses, atm I dont remember if you have said it will be a Harry/Draco..or if not that, are you going to turn him (Harry).....cause Angelus seems to be taking in the misfits...and the abused...and Harry would qualify....plus I think Harry would make a sexy vamp. When is Harry going to come in in some form? I know it is titled Draco Malfoy...but you mentioned Harry's abuse so I figured you will bring him in eventually.....

Oh, I think the twins would be good vamps too........=P

The Art Room is a great idea...you should prolly also have a Music Room...for students who want to play instruments....I would also say like a lounge for all four houses...somewhere they can mingle...."unite within" thing going on in the books. Maybe Draco should figure out a way to have electronics in Hogwarts...and in their section of the castle, have an Electronics room..maybe have movie nights with close friends.
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