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Reviews for Awaiting Love

By : kmarie1985
  • From ANON - June Williams on June 25, 2004
    Poor Snape! Getting stupefied at the Head Table in front of everyone! Good thing Dumbledore rescued the situation. Snape won't be messing with Hermione any more... I'm glad she's standing up for herself.

    One minor suggestion: single-space lines within each paragraph, then two line spaces between paragraphs. Just like this comment of mine.

    Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - loveofmusic on June 19, 2004
    This is a great story.I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Red26 on June 18, 2004
    I like your story very much. I would say poor Hermione but she has got to see that this is for her own safety. Besides I doubt very much Snape will stop her from pursing further education and a career. I'm mean the man is a bit cruel but not that cruel. Look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2004
    Thank you! I really can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 16, 2004
    I really like this story so far. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - alicat on June 15, 2004
    I am enjoying the story and can't wait to read more. I do have one thing to add though and that is you need to space some more to make it easier to read. EG) between people talking and more paragraphs, it's kinda hard to read with it all squashed together I kept losing my spot lol. XOXO
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  • From ANON - firestarter on June 14, 2004
    HI! I think you story plost so far is good. Two suggestions 1) longer chapters, 2) more detail either into the characters them selves or their surrounding. I think this is a great first run :) good luck!
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  • From ANON - droxy on June 14, 2004
    Fast getting to the wedding night, but also thoroughly angsty for HG, forced sex is not a nice thing. It will be interesting to see how you handle this. Snape being so much older and with an impatrient nature and structureing no time within the confiens of the ritual. HG is going to simply freak. I can't even imagine her functioning at the reception.

    Overall, I like how you are handling the adults.

    Looking forward to an update soon!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 14, 2004
    Well shoot, a dang cliffy. I want wedding! I want more soon please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2004
    Write more!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 12, 2004
    Great start for a story. Love the marriage fics. Looking forward to see where this one goes and how you get there. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - mary on June 11, 2004
    This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 10, 2004
    Good start, I'm interested to see where you're going with this. I did notice a couple of spelling mistakes. It's Lucius, not Lucious, and Weasley, not Weasly. Post more soon!
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