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Reviews for Awaiting Love

By : kmarie1985
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Dorfam on December 25, 2006
    nice chap. are u gonna write the rest of the story in this site or are u gonna continue in fsmfiction
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Alexandra Noel on February 01, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! YOU CAN NOT LEAVE THIS story at a WIZARD'S DUEL!!!!!!? I LOVE THIS story!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I love the way they interact, NO ONE can accuse you of being OOC. YOU ARE GREAT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more to this story!
    angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com
    Please and Thank YOU!,
    Alexandra17
    PS: I am angelgrl198816 but...I have not been able to get into my account, thanks~!^_^
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  • From ANON - Megan on August 18, 2005
    Wow it's great, can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - SataiDelenn on August 13, 2005
    Very good story. I found it on Fanfic and got to chapter 6 and rushed over here to find out what else happened. Please update with the next chapter(s) as soon as possible!!!
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  • From ANON - loveofmusic on February 08, 2005
    I hope you write more I am enjoying this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck on it.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarkeee. on October 17, 2004
    I started to read your story on fanfic net, it was very good, a nice story, why have you gone completely over the top!!!
    I love nc17 the same as anyone, however, not all stories need sex and violence to sell them. Still you have my
    attention I and I am one of those people who must complete a fanfic.

    sorry if you think I am wrong, it was just so nice and gentle.
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  • From ANON - Meep on September 19, 2004
    this story is really good, can you please email me when you update it?
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  • From ANON - Mialana on July 23, 2004
    NooooooooOOOOOOOOOOooo! You Need To Update!!! Its too good to be left alone with for the rest of the time!
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  • From ANON - killergirl on July 22, 2004
    wow i like this story very much
    update soon will yah

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  • From ANON - DGloveangel on June 28, 2004
    I've logged onto your adult fanfiction page and just can't wait until you UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Mika aka Gemini Malfoy
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  • From ANON - S. Grey on June 26, 2004
    Bravo. Like how she keeps her know-it-all attitude. xD;
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  • From ANON - raven on June 26, 2004
    Ok, she doesn't want to marry him, is forced into since she wants to marry Draco even less, and now is happy that he essentially raped her and left her on her wedding night? Um, why?

    He knew she was inexperienced but because he didn't want to drag it out he did little to prepare her and if I am reading this right, he orgasmed but she didn't? Then he leaves her feeling lousy to find her way to their reception? Why would she even imagine that sleeping with him again will improve that? And he is going to sleep with her again after hexing him for what reason? Warm body? The small amount of feeling he may hold for her, or at least, he believes he holds for her as none of his actions save cleaning up for his wedding show this?

    Since there is little character development to date, we have no answers to any of this. In fact, if not read in order, we have several different, conflicting stories all within this one. Why are they acting like this? Why did Hermione and Severus have time to shop but not have the houselves move her clothes? Why are his quarters one room when even the smallest boarding schools give at least a small sitting room, bath, and bedroom. Even as a lowely student I had better rooms at my boarding schools! And that's with no magic! All that time describing a wonderful room and that's all we get? One? Please take some of that lovely description and feed it into the characters actions-you have several interesting ideas, but none are being pursued in the manner they deserve.
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  • From ANON - loveofmusic on June 25, 2004
    This story is getting better and better in every chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
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