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Reviews for Humility and Obedience

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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on June 11, 2004
    Good start - very erotic! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - CS on June 11, 2004
    What powerful emos ths this evokes. I think you've captured both characters quite well.

    I like how you build the tale. Hermione's nervoss ass and then 'bravery' and slow then fast acceptance and the giving of herself to the fantasy... that is broken by an ill-timed word from a man who has always humiliated and seemingly despised her. I like that Severus seems to leave his animosity behind as he enjoys the situation, as a man who enjoys the control over a woman who is learning to enjoy not having it. And I wonder what will happen now he knows what he's potentially lost... and look forward to seeing how he - no, they - gt bat back. Get past the barriers of who they've been to each other and what was said, and become all they could be to each other.

    I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - pippi on June 11, 2004
    Wow, this is good, and I like how you're going to continue it. Many people would just leave it at that. Please email me when you have updated.
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on June 11, 2004
    Wow....there really aren't words, just Wow. That was great, so hot. One of the best I've read in a long time. Are you going to continue, or was it a one-shoc? c? I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Jane on June 11, 2004
    GREAT story! The characterizations are just right, the way Snape and Hermione think sounds exactly like them. More, more! (And can you continue keeping Harry and Ron away??) Will you let us see the rest of the scene that Snape had planned for her?
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  • From ANON - txjmfan on June 08, 0000
    Awesome new chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Chris
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