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Reviews for Animal Instinct

By : tawnyteaser
  • From ANON - Ox King on June 15, 2004
    I want to point out a huge mie ine in your fic.
    A wolf is a K9 (dog) Remus was biten by a human who was a Werewolf.

    Feline is a cat. Hermonie was biten by a human who was a Werecat!!!!

    Calling Hermonie a Werewolf, but yet she having feline characteristics
    just doesn't work.
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  • From ANON - Laurie on June 14, 2004
    I'm glad you were able to find a site to post your story. I would still try LordandLadySnape.com. You don't have the errors and time ouobleoblems as FanFiction. I can't believe someone complained. I think you have a very good story.

    On to the story... I think you're doing a wonderful job. It seems to be a possibility that HG ends up pregnant with all the sex going on. Remus keeps putting his nose in will HG put hi his his place during the full moon? Does HG and McGonagall become closer due to HG's loss in family?

    I like the fact that HG and SS are getting some time alone before the full moon. Will SS have an animal form he can share with HG? I hope you keep SS in good character. Meaning he's not one to back down from something he wants.

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  • From ANON - Rosie on June 12, 2004
    More, More, More! Bad, Teaser, Bad!
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  • From DarkFire on June 12, 2004
    Great story. I hope she isn't pregnant. That will be lower her to animal completely. Also I wait to see a werewolf Hermione with a lucid mind and not soo dark and ugly. I expect the cat in her help in that matter.t int in the end you are the author. And I believe that sorprises are in order when you write. ;P

    DarkFire
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on June 11, 2004
    Should you continue????? HELL YES YOU SHOULD CONTINUE !!!!! You can't write 14 chapters and then leave us hanging are you crazy??? You could get lynched for doing something like that! LOL You got me hooked and I need more. Please post more chapters soon. I am really loving this fic.

    ~ Jaimie ~
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  • From ANON - Ness on June 11, 2004
    I love your story. It's great, interesting, well written and I'm really glad that you update regularly. Good work. You have talent!
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