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Reviews for I Want to Touch You

By : Fedallah
  • From BethNorris on August 07, 2011
    I love this story. Please please please write more :) I love how this could actually happen, like, the situations and peoples reactions. You are a talented writer
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  • From Sagerune on December 28, 2010
    I regret not reviewing previous chapters But this is amazing and 1 of the most realistic Weasley Twincest I've ever read.
    If you still look at this fanfic and read this. I hope you do.
    You describe Fred and George's feeling, confusion, non clarity amazingly in a fast pace and angst overtone that makes them come alive.

    You know if you want this to get feed back and appropriate appreciation you should post it some where else...
    Most ppl come on here for porn/lime/smut plain and simple and this goes way too hard/realistic for most people. Cause you're actually building base.

    Frankly you dont just describe the sex you describe the morning after with a world thats not very... accepting. A world thats too closely related to ours anyway.

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  • From AngieLore on July 07, 2010
    I love this story! I love how you start it out with George feeling a little weird and then all the things in between. I started to cry though when George was collasped. This really is a lovely story. I'm surprised you didn't get too many reviews. I'm sad that you haven't updated in the longest time though.
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  • From ANON - xiola on December 26, 2005
    i suck at this review thing, but i think, since you deserve it i have to tell you it's one if not the best Fred and George fic i've read so far. :D for my personal tastes it's a touch melodrama-ey in the middle but i suppose that's neccessary for plot movement - otherwise you've made me feel like the characters are still in-character while i'm reading it, while still having enough boy-touching along with the UST to keep me satisfied XD

    um. so yeah. i defenitely like it, and would gladly have more if you're still writing it. :D
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  • From ANON - SuperHyperCrazyPerson(too lazy to login) on December 21, 2005
    I love this story. It awakened some dormant thrill inside me for twincest. I love the way you've incorporated angst with love and tenderness, and blood. I love the way you've described the twins' interactions. I think this is the best George/Fred story I've ever read!
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  • From ANON - Incothe on November 15, 2005
    Hey, this is amazing since I usually don't review I know I'm horrible. I'm just starting to read this story and I'm excited I hope its good well I'll review again later...
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  • From ANON - Wolfiekins on October 05, 2005
    Wow, what an intense story! You have uncovered things about the Twins that I had never even imgined! Amazing! Looking forward to more when you find the time. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - Genevieve on September 05, 2005
    Well, even though I don't often review--hell, I never do--I thought I'd be nice--plus your fanfic is wonderfully unorthodox--and give you a pleasent review^^. Even though it's taboo, twincest is strangely exciting, as is all forms of yaoi, but twincest especially; there is just something terribly sexy about two people who are so alike, who share such a mental and phyical bond, loving each other, more than society says they should. Hope you're having as much fun as possibly at college, and I have to admit I know where you're coming from, confused about your sexually and such. I just discovered that I am bisexual--although I haven't really done anything with other women yet, I feel the pull of attraction often--and have yet to reveil this deep secret to my friends and family and probably will not have the courage too for some time, unfortunately. Well, anyway, keep up the good work, and though I know you're pressed, try to write as much as you can and I'll keep reading it^^. Well, talk to you later, Geni.
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  • From ANON - Levi on September 05, 2005
    I love this story. xD WRITE MORE MORTAL. :D ONE OF THE FIRST REALLY GOOD FRED AND GEORGE STORIES I HAVE SEEEN.
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  • From ANON - Sabina Jordan on August 13, 2005
    I, though how I've looked, have not found many George/Fred stories on AFF.

    This was...amazing. Honestly. One of the best things I've ever read. I shall be reccommending it to everyone (I rec. a lot of stuff to people).

    Please post more stories! I would absolutely love it.

    So, I thank you for writing this :)
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  • From ANON - Kosh on July 26, 2005
    Excellent piece of work. I did not leave a review for each chapter though, but brilliant. Keep it coming!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Eliztric on July 19, 2005
    Fedallah -

    There is one word for this fic you have written, and that word is beautiful. You have managed to write something that touched me very deeply in a way that many other things have not. I thank you for this, and only hope that you understand the gravity of what I mean to say, but cannot put into words intelligibly. Something tells me you will know.

    In Admiration,

    Eliztric
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  • From 4LeafClover on June 25, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story. The characterization was phenomenal and I thought that the dialogue was amazing. I actually liked the character you created. It would have been fun if she taught Sex Ed. The story seemed like a realistic and slightly twisted fairytale, particularly at the end. I have a slight fetish with fairytales. I thought insinuations during Fred's and George's discussion was abstrusely hilarious and cute.
    The story was not overbearingly dramatic considering the subject(s) that were addressed. It seems slightly odd that the other characters would be so oblivious to their relationship. Perhaps it's denial...heh...
    It's a very good story with good characterization and sequences. Somehow, it manages to remain unique among the many stories that have the same themes. You're very talented, I hope you write more stories in the future!


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  • From ANON - Herme23 on March 22, 2005
    Hey! This is absolutely awesome! Fred and George have always been my fave characters in Harry Potter and this is the best story I've ever read about them! Please continue! And hell yeah, isn't college great? Except that it gets in the way of my story writing! Have fun and keep writing! Yours, Herme
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  • From ANON - War-chan on December 14, 2004
    WOW!!! Oh My Gods!!! I love F/G fics! There are very and I do mean VERY little stroys 'bout them!!!
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Ja ne
    BigFan(of F/G, and now you o'crose!)
    Miss War-chan ^___^
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