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Reviews for Long Strides to a Short Walk

By : EmeraldGrey
  • From ANON - Hermgin on September 26, 2004
    This a great Story EG!!!!! I love Drama....and this story has lots
    of it! Some many things happening all at once. I feel for both Harry
    & Draco...I do hope that Harry will forgive Draco and find something
    in his heart...and just let himself love Draco.

    I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work EG!

    Kisses,

    ~Hermgin~
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  • From DemonBlaze on September 13, 2004
    the story is wonderful so far and i cant wait for more. i saw a review you left for the story "shades of black" to that reviewer who said ya cant find out your gay at 11 and i want to commend you on what you said.
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  • From ANON - EmeraldGrey on August 30, 2004

    This isLaetLaetus. Ty very much for your review, as it really made my day, er
    week, month, lol (you get the picture?) It made me happy, so thank you!
    I sent you an e-mail saying more, I hope you got it, and again, ty!
    Your words have invigorated Serendipity, my muse, and that's always of the good! BTW?
    Yeah, it's good to be back! And, ty for loving my story!
    @shy-Em
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  • From ANON - laetus on August 30, 2004
    Coool!! you're back!! life is so sweet with me...
    so, what are they going to do with Stanley??? they could have think of it before hand but they wanted to shag so badly... aaah hypocrite boys!
    anyway, I love your story.
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  • From ANON - @shley on July 18, 2004
    Hi wonderful reviewers! *waves at Starlit Rena, Keikokin, Sak, Alex, Sisko66002 and Jess)
    I wanted to thank you all personally for taking the time to stop, read and review my stuffs. =)

    Starlit Rena: TY and I plan on it! TY for your review!
    Keikokin: Heh...You crack me up! TY for your imiginative and refreshing review, lol It's kept me on my toes to try and be as "brilliant and bloody confusing" as I possibly can!
    Sak: YT for your review here as well as on my other story Luv, it means alot! But, here, at LSTASW, it's ANGST luv, sorry, but things are gonna get worse, before they get better. But? I promise you, it's gonna be worth it, and things WILL get better for our boys.
    Alex: Luv, it's up to Chappy 9-B. TY for your review, and I hope you're still enjoying it!
    Sisko66002: TY for your review, and, like I told Sak, things will get worse before getting better. Yes, they DO love each other, BUT?? They BOTH have alot of growing up to do, and they need to stop acting like such gits..lol
    Jess: TY for your review Luv. I'm happy you are enjoing the story.
    The song lyrics are staying though, as I painstakenly copy them(by hand) and I chose them to move the story, help set the moods I'm trying for. I did, however; take into consideration your suggestion. And, as I am now working on W-9-C, I'll go back and make the necessary changes. =)
    OH, and? I don't think you're being harsh or critical. In fact? I'm reading a kick arse D/H now, lol and the writer is driving ME mental with her :IN POV OUT POV, every bloody paragraph!! *rolls eyes* does she NOT think we can figure that out??
    lol So, no, I was not aware of it, and TY for bringing it to my attentions. =)

    Everyone: BTW, I'm thinking about making a copagepage with links to the songs in my story. This way, the reader can listen to the song and read the story, feeling what I was trying to get across. So, all ya'll, let me know what ya think of that, k?
    Again, ty all for your caring and sharing your views with me. Remeber, feedback, it's a writers virtual chocolate!!
    Hugs, @shy-Em
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  • From ANON - Jess on July 16, 2004
    This is a really good fic and I can't wait to read more of it. However, the lyrics or whatever the italicized text is, is distracting. Putting it in once in a while, or maybe every few paragraphs if you feel it is necessary and fits with what is going on is fine. But every 2 lines or so? It keeps throwing me out of the story and wrecking the mood you are creating. I don't mean this to sound harsh or overly criticizing, I just thought I'd mention it in case you weren't aware. But over all, it's a wonderful fic and I hope you update soon!
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  • From sisko66002 on June 28, 2004
    Wonderful story, though I do hope it gets a bit happier. Afterall Draco and Harry love each other verry much and deserve to be happy.
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  • From ANON - alex on June 27, 2004
    I love this story, please continue iot as soon as possible, ok? i really can't wait to read more of it. thank you!

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  • From ANON - sak on June 18, 2004
    You are not making things simple for Harry and Draco. They truly feel for each other, but refuse to acknowledge it even after one night of passion. The development that they are both pregnant is intriguing. Will this bring them together and acknowledge what they feel or will they continue to deny themselves? I guess I will have to wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Keikokin on June 18, 2004
    SOO if James and Ls has had um Draco...or Harry...whichever maybe Lucius had Draco and James had Harry ok my brain can wrap that better then they just knocked up their own brothers? Um whoa. *snaps fingers* ::nods to barkeep for another pint::: that mean that there kids would be not only be brothers but first cousins? then ACK I give up "I can do the only thing proper in this case!" :::faints with Yuengling in hand:::: ((brilliant fic bloody confusing whoa))

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