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Reviews for You had me from hello

By : Serenitas
  • From callistianstar on October 23, 2008
    Oh my! I actually have an extreme dislike of first-person HP stories, but this was fabulous! Honestly. I am a little worried that Draco said this story was for the Daily Prophet (sex scene and all?). lol But I loved Draco's self-ego stroking. That makes me laugh. Wonderful job with this.
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  • From MisstressNicole on August 24, 2007
    The mistakes in this took away from the pleasure of reading this. Not all of them were typos, there were spots where you looked as if you smashed your head into the keyboard. There were areas were grammar and punctuation could have been worked out better, by a simple read over. Also spell check would have caught a lot of the errors. I find it easier to read a story that has one space between paragraphs and not many. It takes away from the feel of the story. You spelled tongue wrong every time you used it. It got really annoying. As far as the plot and story line goes, it was a good idea but poorly executed. I could suggest a beta, however if you want and you don't feel that I'm offending you, I've fixed the obvious errors. You can reach me at MisstressNicole@hotmail.com.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
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  • From ANON - Carol on November 16, 2006
    I have only one word to say. De...Li...Cious! God damn that was good. *shivers and grins* Harry and Draco sex is always the best! It was beautiful! Nice job doing it in the first person context. I don't write first person fics all that well, but that was great! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Kayo on September 27, 2006
    I really like this story. It was sweet and breathtaking all at once. It flowed pretty well too, and you managed yo cover a lot of things at once. So thumbs up for this one. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Taylor on January 22, 2006
    That was so sweet!!!! That was the best portrayal of Draco that i have read (well other than J.K's Draco) i hope you keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Lee on January 14, 2006
    Sorry, but my sister began giggling at the phrase "dead, mounted and stuffed." When I listened closer, I could hear her chocking out the words 'Slytherins' and 'necropheliacs'. Again, sorry, just had to share.
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  • From ANON - Dackelblick on November 30, 2005
    Beatiful. So, so beautiful! Love it!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 03, 2005
    OMG! i luved this--- soooo great!! cya xx
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  • From ANON - avihenda on August 11, 2005
    that was such a cute story! loved it, it was truly sweet.
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  • From ANON - LADY on June 14, 2005
    YOU DID IT AGAIN. ANOTHER GREAT FIC. I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE A LOT AN YOU HAVE A GREAT IMGANATION

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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  • From ANON - Just Call Me Darkness on March 02, 2005
    Hah. It /is/ true. The old fics really /are/ the best fics. I totally loved this fic, I'm glad I got the opportunity to read it.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 25, 2004
    That was truly fantastic! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 25, 2004
    That was truly fantastic! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - LadyNight on April 10, 2004
    That story was so good!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Michi on June 19, 2003
    Hello! I'm SO GLAD your site is back up! My eyes were watering when I thought Harry was gone for good! I LOVE THIS STORY! I would have to give it from a scale of one to ten (ten being the best)...well...a TEN! I hope to read more of your stories!



    Michi
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