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Reviews for The Tenth Rule

By : Morier
  • From ANON - LaurenLeigh on September 14, 2004
    I, as many others I'm sure, have very much enjoyed this story and how you portrayed Snape. The OC's were very well developed (I can very much identify with Bethany's becoming a good student to try and please her Professor!) and the mounting tension between the two was also very pleasing, they slowly went from best buddies to jealous competitors, loved that. I much enjoyed your diction as well, do keep up the good work and I hope to see more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Domino on September 14, 2004
    You're killing me, you know that? You've captured the frustration and tension of Bethany and Alice. I'm like them: I want more! Your writing is excellent, as is your grasp of syntax and diction. A few uneven patches here and there, but on the whole a delightful and stimulating piece. Although I had not envisioned the formidable Potions master in this way, he is more than believable: he is exact. I would caution you to pay attention to punctuation. Sorry, but my academic backgound dictates that I must comment on the mechanics of your story as well as the essence of it. Well done, my dear, and get to writing. Apparently, I'm not the only one frustrated by your tantalizing delivery.
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  • From ANON - Fleur on September 12, 2004
    Ouch...harsh punishment indeed! Can't wait to read your next chapter....update soon
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  • From on September 11, 2004
    Hurry, update!!! lol, I love the story!!! :o)
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  • From ANON - Lynn on September 11, 2004
    FINISH!!!! PLEASE!!!! lol. so cruel, yet so addictive
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  • From ANON - ABR on September 11, 2004
    Very good... I keep checking to see if you have updated. I really like this story and I cannot wait to see how it ends. Please please please....
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  • From ANON - Lynn on September 10, 2004
    You have to keep writing! I'm addicted!! Keep writing! Please!!
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  • From ANON - aramis on September 08, 2004
    this is a very captivating story. I like the way you developed the characters so far and their interrelationships.
    the last chapter rang very true to me(how the unprepared Alice develop a wrapped view of sexuality and love because of Snape's ministrations)
    keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Fleur on September 07, 2004
    So I just read your story.....great job! I like how you keep Snape is character.....good story, update soon
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  • From ANON - T on September 05, 2004
    Excellent yet again but what a teaser, hope you update in the next few days!
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  • From ANON - Lynn on September 05, 2004
    Wonderful story! So climatic! You must finish the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sevfan on September 04, 2004
    Argh! You left us hanging...how naughty of you.
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  • From ANON - Flower on August 31, 2004
    Your story is soo delicious! You HAVE to write more! Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 28, 2004
    Very amazing story. You're going to continue it, right? I really can't wait to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Malice on August 27, 2004
    OH COME ON! Hurry up! Yer being as nasty as Snape keeping us waiting for more!

    :)

    Awsome. Thanks!
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