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Reviews for Potter\'s Sister

By : PirateDucky
  • From HeartStar on July 25, 2012
    lol I love this I hope you update soon I mean when you can yah soon .... when you can... lol
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  • From ANON - Melanee on July 04, 2004
    Many people who begin their writing collection on AFF are inexperienced, but nevertheless, take time to research the history, information and SPELLING of the main characters their fanfiction piece will be focused on. However, their are some select fics who, for example, portray Blaise Zabini as a female, create a cast of American exchange students (Mary-Sue's), or, in your case, spell GINNY Weasley G-i-n-y and LILY Evans Potter L-i-l-l-y. These careless yet simple to be avoided mistakes made this fic terrible before I even read the horrible writing. I was half suprised that you didn't spell Harry Potter H-a-i-r-y P-o-t-e-r. Somebody call the canon police!
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  • From CountessCharisma on June 28, 2004
    What a terrific start! The plot potential here is HUGE!!!! :) I look forward to seeing where you take this.

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  • From ANON - DreamAngel on June 25, 2004
    I love the idea for the story. The only suggestions I can make isspacspace the stuff a bit better. It's kinda hard to read. Other then that I love it. Keep it up and I can't wait for more.
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