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Reviews for Beautiful Disaster

By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    Double Standard indeed. I can see Narcissa's point, but good Lord. A few chapters back, Draco MADE his friends stop tormenting Hermione - Hermione just looks at Ron and Harry and says inane things like "oh honestly" and "aren't you glad he's not being a git any more?". She's supposed to be the Gryffindor! But Draco is showing more courage then Hermione is!! He has to sacrifice everything he's ever believed, everyone in his life that he values other then his parents, for the sake of a girl who until recently he hated more then anything humanly imaginable! And she has the nerve to say that _HE'S_ being unreasonable?! I can understand the trapped feeling, but I just... just... I... How can she do that? Doesn't it hurt her?! I want to alternately smack her and hug her. She may be an idiot right now but... still. And Draco did try to be nice to her friends - for months he did. And all they did was try to make things worse. But of course, the only one time he picks a fight with them, she blows up at him, he grovels, is honest, and then she proceeds to ignore him for months. When her parents said they were proud of her, all I could think of was how obvious it was that they had no clue what they were talking about. The situation is rapidly deteriorating, and unfortunately, Hermione is more to blame then he is. He's trying to make the best of it, and she's railing about things beyond his control. Why couldn't she go on about S.P.E.W. again or something? She needs a distraction.

    Oh, and, thank you for beating up Weasley, that was just beautiful.
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  • From ANON - jagsgurl15 on November 20, 2005
    omg! this story has made me cry so much and yet laugh too...
    please update soon... i cant wait for chapter 14!
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  • From ANON - kueble on November 17, 2005
    I just found this story tonight and it's wonderful! I can't wait for another chapter. I'm sure Christmas at Malfoy Mannor will be fun...interesting.
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  • From ANON - Karmen on November 16, 2005
    Incredibly good fic! I am really excited about the story! You are really talentedand you shouldn't stop writing!!! Just to say that we don't forget you so don't forget us! Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Shay on November 16, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...are you getting the hint? Damn, this is good! I hope you'll update again soon...like yesterday! Frustrating just sitting around, twidling my thumbs and tapping my foot on the floor. Giving myself a headache, if you must know!

    So, on with it! Churn out the goodness that is this story and HURRY THE HELL UP!!!

    Hugs, kisses, chocolate, flowers, jewlery, sports cars...whatever it takes - I promise it to you!! Just HURRY!!! MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - jenny on November 16, 2005
    you've got a a good plot so far, and for the most part I like your versions of d & hr, but you need new betas, because they're not doing their jobs. besides basic grammar, be careful about repeating ideas; know what concise is. a sentence shouldnt exist just to fill up space, everything should drive the plot or describe the scene or reveal the emotions.

    I love that this is more than just smut, and thank you, thank you for avoiding the head-boy-and-head-girl-sharing-a-dormitory cliche! why didnt hermione accept head girl? when is are they gonna finally see the love btwn them? Looking forward to next chapter.
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  • From ANON - rush22 on November 16, 2005
    I love ths story!!! please update as soon as you can! i cant wait!
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  • From ANON - Faeriewing on November 13, 2005
    Awwww....I love it when they get all sappy! LOL Anyways, I am so glad to see that you have updated, and I can't wait to read what you come up with next!! This is turning out to be such a great story- I love how you have captured the love/hate aspect of Hermoine and Draco. It is a perfect balance, and I can't wait to see how you twist it to your desires!! Alas, now I must await the next chapter you post... is it goin to be soon? Will begging help? Let me know, and beg I shall. :D
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  • From ANON - Shay on November 08, 2005
    I've been enjoying this story. I'm actually a bit reluctant to read stories on this site because I never know when they're updated! Is there some way for you to keep me in the loop? I really do want to know what's going to happen in the end...
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on November 04, 2005
    Great story! (However I think all authors are conspiring against their readers and purposely leaving all stories off at christmas) I hope you continue this story soon, I'm looking foreward to how Hermione is going to turn the Malfoy Manor upside down with her decorations and whatnot. Wonderful plot, great detail, and exceptional job keeping everyone in character. I look foreward to your updates!
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  • From ANON - jem89 on October 31, 2005
    I love this story! It's one of the best I've ever read :) Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nadia on October 31, 2005
    Hi! I justed wanted to tell you that I just got done reading your fic, and I have to tell you that I loved what I've readed so far. I for one hope that you are going to finish this fic, because I really really really want to know what happen's next's. *_* ^_^
    well hope to readed more of this fic.
    See you later.^_^Nadia
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  • From ANON - Tarheelinchicka on October 31, 2005
    i really like this and hope you keep writing!
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  • From ANON - GriseldaMarchbanks on October 30, 2005
    I found that Hermione was not handling the situation with the aplomb that one would normally expect of her. She was rather immature, no?
    Wonderful writing...frustrating and fantastic!
    Update soon...
    GM
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  • From ANON - sassyspicegurrl on October 30, 2005
    also, i totally agree with valkyrie's request to have, once they finally mate, hermione do something to make draco jealous and take her possessively!!!!!!! if it fits in the story, at least. and remember to UPDATE SOON. think of your loyal readers! ;p
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