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Reviews for Beautiful Disaster

By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - me on December 01, 2004
    ITS ABOUT TIME!!! wooot!!! im soo excited!! this is one of my favs!!! please please please update SOOOOOOOOOOON
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on December 01, 2004
    I really liked chapter 9. I really love this fic. I think that you are a really good writer. I really want to see what happens when Hermione has another confrontation with Ron. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Rei on December 01, 2004
    An update! *faints*
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  • From ANON - Avanell on December 01, 2004
    Love this story so much...was so happy to see more posted. this is awesome!
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  • From ANON - nastassja on December 01, 2004
    omg this story is excellent! its like something that can actually happen in the real Harry Potter stories! wow! come back and write! im dying! its sooo good! plz????
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  • From ANON - Betty on November 25, 2004
    I can see why you have so many hits and so few reviews - I don't know what to make of your story. And after 7 chapters - I don't know if that's necessarily a good thing. Your concept is good, but there are points you should have developed that would have given so much erotic depth to your writing. I mean, this is adultfanfiction, not the fluffy stuff we find on ff.net. Like the fact Draco can make her dream whatever he wants. Why hasn't Hermione been having erotic dreams? And the characters are a little on the OOC side of unfriendly. My suggestions: Don't be discouraged, introduce sensuality in not-so-subtle ways, and leave characters who have not point of being there OUT.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 21, 2004
    I love this story, Ash. I have been reading it since you first posted it. Please update soon!!!I'm dying here. Draco/Hermione fics are awesome. Now I'm hooked with the veela stories.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2004
    Please oh please oh please update!!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on November 18, 2004
    I really do not know how to word this, however, your story is very good, and I do not know what trouble
    other reader's or fanfic writers are having. But I think its time to cover your back.
    Have you considered Pureblood on the Ashwinder site, I just do not want to loose reading your work, if I am being
    a nagging reader, I apologize and will continue to suffer the AFF net. I really love the site, but I have only been
    able to log on for more that a while before it goes off, or I have been unable to access the site at all.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2004
    really really really really good

    JUST UPDATE
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  • From ANON - jaden41tb on November 17, 2004
    Please update soon!! I love this story. It is so good!!! I can't wait for Hermione to realize that she is destined for Draco and that she loves him!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2004
    Pleeeeease update!! I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - Mya on November 01, 2004
    I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Bluemidget on October 25, 2004
    Great to see another chapter of this. i love your stuff! Are you still also working on Figured You Out?
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  • From ANON - pink_ninj4 on October 25, 2004
    I need more of this s!
    I!
    I love the way you have portrayed the bond between a Veela and their mate!
    Hermione is definatly a lucky one.
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