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Reviews for Beautiful Disaster

By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - Krys on August 27, 2004
    This story just keeps getting better and better! I love it :) I can't wait till Hermione finds out she is Draco's mate. I can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Meredith on August 27, 2004
    I am thoroughly enjoying your story and I hope you keep writing. I love the idea of "mates".
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 27, 2004
    Brilliant storyline, really nice and all. I
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  • From ANON - jeannett on March 21, 0000
    brilliant story..please continue, i wouldn't mind seeing ron seperated from his body parts, or just missing a few teeth.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on August 25, 2004
    Loved the longer chapter. Don't suppose I could talk you into making all of them that long? No? Damn. Still, possessive Draco was great. And I like that he didn't just shove Pansy aside since they have that history there. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - fran on August 25, 2004
    wonderful hun!

    I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - JenJen on August 24, 2004
    Love this story, good writing good plot. I am a little disappointed that Ron was making a bet to sleep with Hermione but it is your story and it is about Draco! LOL
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  • From ANON - Draco_Luva on August 23, 2004
    OMG! You HAVE to update soon! Email me when you do! I love this story so much and it sounds like this could actually happen!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on August 23, 2004
    I was so happy to go to aff and find that you updated, and a long one too. I can't wait to see more. This is very interesting. Keep up the great work.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on August 23, 2004
    I liked the premise of this story, but I find the pacing too slow. I'm sorry I see too mangsangst ahead. I don't understand why he's acting that way towards her knowing she will rebel at being ordered around, and he doesn't want to tell her she's his mate. Good story but too much drama/angst for me.
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  • From ANON - Jules on August 23, 2004
    Hey Ashley:

    A great chapter, arguing & snogging galore!
    Although it is frustrating to watch I really do enjoy Stubborn!Hermione and Bullheaded!Draco. Their fights are almost as good as their snogging. Hope Draco pummels Ron some more, just 'cause he's a super arse in this fic.
    Can't wait for more Veela!Draco ~ I love it!
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on August 23, 2004
    She's not Draco's bitch? That's what she thinks! LOL I love that line! Did you know that there is a Draco/Hermione story called "Draco's Bitch"? One of the best I've ever read. It even has a sequel - Hiding Hermione. Anywho, glad you've updated this gem of a story. :) Can't wait to see Hermione succumb to Draco's advances and become his bitch for real! ;P
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  • From ANON - Rio on August 22, 2004
    wow wow wow...awesome story....very interesting plot...i love and hate the suspense
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  • From ANON - Red on August 22, 2004
    Wonderful! I had thought you'd abandoned this story :) Serves me right! This was a great chapter. I love that it was so long too :) Anyway, Draco beating up Ron was awesome. I don't know if it's wrong to think that, but after the things he said about Mione he deserved it. Draco really ought to take Dumbledore's advice and tell Mione what's what. I'm surprised she wasn't a bit more suspicious of Draco. I mean, he's a Slytherin who spent six (?) years calling her mudblood and mocking her frinds. A few semi-friendly encounters wouldn't erase that, no? And then for him to start telling her who she can see? I'd expect her to be a bit more surprised/suspicious than angry. But their make-out session was hot, you wrote that really well. Also, the scene between Pansy and Draco was interesting even though I despise Pansy. How in the world is Draco supposed to prove that Slytherins can be good wizards with people like Pansy around? Anyway, I'm glad to see (read?) your still writing and I look forward to the next chapter!

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  • From AllisonLurati on August 22, 2004
    Lovely as always, update soon. ~Her ier
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