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Reviews for Beautiful Disaster

By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - aku_neko on August 04, 2004
    omg.

    you have me hooked. The relationship between Draco and his parents, i thins grs great. It is the kind that is most often cast aside; who wants to hear about the Malfoys having a happy home life, eh? lol

    Snape's reaction to the Draco and Hermione: classic. not to mention the Dumbledore's. About the scene in the library, i thought that Hermione would have remembered that there is no such rule considering how often she has read Hogwarts: a history. Anywhos, I cannot wait to read more. This is a great story, and you've got great skill.

    uberkudos

    =^o^=
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  • From Eire on July 31, 2004
    Excellent! Please update soon, I am really enjoying your story. I loved the cliffhanger ending of chapter 4 (of course I'll start to hate it if you don't write more soon).
    I don't even normally like Draco/Hermione stories but bravo on your work!
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  • From ANON - Indygodusk on July 30, 2004
    I am delighted by this story! didndidn't anyone notice Draco staring at her all through the meeting? And if Draco worked so hard to get the head boy position, as he stated in ch 1, why is he being such a screw up in meetings? Or did he just want the prestige of the name? Hermione is a virgin, yet she plans to have sex for the first time with Ron just for revenge. Doesn't she have any repect for herself? And how does she plan on Draco finding out? I'm sure she doesn't want to be caught in the act, so that means she intends to be gossiped about by the school, which I would think she has too much pride to take, or that she intends to tell him herself, or to get Ron to tell him. Why couldn't she just lie to Draco and tell him it was too late already, without using Ron, which is a rotten thing to do, and mean?
    We haven't seen much of Harry, but we don't need to really. I like the suduction so far. Thank you for entertaining me, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - pam on July 25, 2004
    yay! now there's a good thought. i like draco insanely jealous. go girl! make hermione and ron snog and then draco pooeeehy jealous. i love it! i love your story. til next time.
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  • From DanishGirl on July 21, 2004
    You've got to update right now! Can't wait! This fic is just bloody fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Lana on July 19, 2004
    I really love your story...I can't wait until you update again...please do so soon!!!! =o)
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  • From ANON - the earth guide on July 19, 2004
    Wow! Things are heating up. I like the letter from LM, it more clearly explained his feelings on the matter of HG being D's mate. In a lot of stories it seems he just says "ok" and that's the end of it; not to satisfying. I continue to adore your D!'s 's not a one dimensional goody-goody or pure evil like many characterization of him in D/HG stories. Keep up the good work and update soon - I am dying to see how H's relationship with R goes.

    the earth guide
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  • From ANON - Jamie on July 18, 2004
    Hermione sleep with Ron? Icky! It's a good thing that Draco won't let it happen. I am loving this fic and cannot wait for more!

    Jamie :)
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  • From ANON - beyond_evil on July 18, 2004
    NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    How can you leave it like that? I hope you update soon....grrr....you better update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    Oh no! Don't try that you silly girl!

    Great fanfic. just read the first four chapters today. Very interesting concept. I'm curious to see how it all pans out!
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  • From ANON - firestarter on July 17, 2004
    Oh no, Hermione is asking for trouble... Good chapter I really like this fic.
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  • From ANON - xoulblade on July 17, 2004
    ooo that does not sound like a good idea, Hermione.............anyway I'm enjoying your story, keep it up and update soon!!
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  • From ANON - dana on July 17, 2004
    great chap cant wait for more hope we dont have to wait that long for the next one ;0)
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  • From ANON - Red on July 17, 2004
    [He watched as she nibbles her lip and crosses and uncrosses her legs.] The first/second/third person pov switched a few times, but other than that it was a good chapter. Sleep with Ron, eh? Hee hee.
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  • From ANON - poetrychik on July 17, 2004
    oooooooh! You bad girl! Sleep with Ron??? Talk about pushing Draco's buttons!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! :)
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