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Reviews for Beautiful Disaster

By : AshleyZ
  • From jaceni50 on January 27, 2010
    Great chapter. I don't know if I've told you before, but love the length! :) Can't wait till the next update and love the fact that it's a long veela story that still has me coming back for more. :D
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  • From apkblack on January 27, 2010
    Despite the fact that I usually avoid Hogwarts-years stories, have just finished a marathon read of the whole thing and am so glad I did. Well done. Seeing when it was first published, am glad to see that you've updated it ... lovely chapter.

    One thing I loved particularly about it was that you made their first time really feel like a first time. Yes, he had his whole veela reaction, and they took care of the ritual part, but once they got to the rest of it, it was just like it should be (and probably was for most of us). Awkward, painful, but life-changing. Great choice on your part. It would have been too easy to use the whole veela-mate-intensity thing to make a real bodice-ripper passionfest, but it wouldn't have had the impact that this did. Really beautifully done.

    Hoping you update again VERY soon.
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  • From KarenHill on January 26, 2010
    What a beautifully written chapter! So they have finally bonded. I can't wait to read about Ginny's response to the news of Hermione being Draco's mate. I also am anxious to read about Draco's parents reaction to the news that they have bonded. I'm sure they will be relieved. I was thrilled that you updated again. This is an exceptional story.
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  • From apkblack on January 26, 2010
    Just starting this story and glad I am. Well written.

    Am surprised that you chose to have Draco be honest with Dumbledore, and I'm assuming that Lucius was in his letter as well. Thought you'd do the standard thing of the Malfoys playing it close to the chest and lying their way through getting into Dumbledore's good graces. I'm glad you did it this way. I hate "Dumbledore is a dupe or an idiot" stories.

    Anyway, on to the rest. Am enjoying it.
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  • From kayemkay on January 26, 2010
    Haha. I forgot about this story! I was itching for a veela Draco/Hermione fic too! I loved the latest update! Ginny's just awesome, leaving her poor bf in such a state! Yay! They finally did the deed! Awww and now they're all happy and in love! *does the happy sappy dance*
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 26, 2010
    Yeah. Thanks for the update. I so enjoy this story. Looking forward to Ginny's reaction. lol HG4eva
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  • From jade2099 on January 18, 2010
    Absolutely amazing! You've created a story where I actually LIKE Lucius Malfoy. :) No small feat that. :) This is simply amazing. I love how things have been growing between Draco and Hermione...hell, I'd fall in love with the git too if I were her! :) I'm looking forward to your next update!
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  • From mhaj78 on January 11, 2010
    okay, so i can't tell how often you've updated this, only that you just did so recently...but let me say OH. MY. GOSH. This story is AMAZING!! I see you first started writing it six years ago, but I think i might die if it only gets a chapter every 3 months or so. it's so, so great! great story, fantastic writing, awesome character development...i look forward to stalking this story regularly for updates! job well done! :)
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  • From dragon37 on January 07, 2010
    I do hope you write more soon.
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  • From alina290 on January 07, 2010
    I have been waiting for so long. Thank you so much for this chapter. Blaise and Pansy are such cowards. I hope you will post the next chapter soon. Once again thank you so much.
    Liz
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  • From readingwoman777 on January 06, 2010
    Well, at almost midnight I have just finished re-reading the entire story to date... It has been so long I felt like I couldn't just read the new chapter. The story is most engrossing, & I also like the slow build-up of feelings & trust between the two. Must admit I was astonished that Ron's reaction was halfway reasonable: he's so often shown as a complete nitwit (I've never thought that was fair). Anyway, hope you'll be inspired to continue updating & actually complete this.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 05, 2010
    Still here. Still reading. Still very much enjoying! I am glad to see you haven't let the story slide. :-) I look forward to more soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From jaceni50 on January 05, 2010
    Yay, your back. Hopefully you won't take another close to an year break. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From KarenHill on January 05, 2010
    This has to be the best veela fic I've ever read. I was thrilled to see an update. It is so well written and believable. I am glad that she told Ron, hopefully her mind is now more settled. I have thoroughly enjoyed your slow build up of her trust in him. Also, it's perfect that they have now told each other that they love one another. I hope that you will be able to continue to update this story. It truly is a remarkable work and I hope you will be able to complete the story. Thank you for the update. Anxiously awaiting more
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  • From smmz79 on January 05, 2010
    yeahhhh i am soooo glad that you are back.... i love this fic i am glad that they are starting to allow to others to know about them although some of them found out with out draco or hermione wanting them to know.... i can not believe that blaise and pansy are trying to blame draco for hermiones attack.... to bad he has a great alibi
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