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By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - Malena on July 03, 2004
    Ah! I love Draco-veela fics! And this one looks promising!! I like Crookshanks appearance ^^ (it's a character i love!) Please please, another chapter! ^O^
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  • From ANON - the earth guide on July 03, 2004
    This is quite a nice start. I did have conern over Lucius' easy acceptance (though not over much as it IS a fic!). I was also surprised at Draco's acceptance but as he is veela, it's probably not a big deal to him. I really enjoyed the way you are developing his emotional attachments to Hermione. That is one of the intrigueing things about the "Draco as Veela" fics. Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Update soon!

    the earth guide
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  • From ANON - Lessa on July 03, 2004
    How interesting! It is my suspicion that Hermione is a little more inclined towards Draco than he thinks. Not that she's not going to give him a rough time of it. I look forward to her making him earn her love and respect it would teach him some maturity. Keep up the good work I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MsPosada on July 02, 2004
    I am so glad you updated. This is my first Veela fic, and from the complaints I have heard from other ones, I am glad you were the one to break my Veela!fic virginty.

    About Lucius, I can see POV POV on him, that was what I always thought about him myself (but he does and always will have his Pure Blood Pride).
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  • From ANON - Alicia on July 01, 2004
    What's up?Well I'm just here to tell you how good this story is....I really like the plot!Good Job!
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  • From ANON - Breeze on July 01, 2004
    This story is so good!!! Update soon, please, I really want to find out how he wins Hermione over!!!
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  • From ANON - kjsparkles on July 01, 2004
    Another great chapter! I don't find the Malfoys's switch out of character. I see them as being very biased toward purebloods, but upon learning of Riddle's ancestry would think much less of him and his agenda. I also see self-preservation as a strong quality in them, and having a seer tell you that your side is going to loose would cause a switch. And remember, power is what a Slytherin craves. They would go to either side as long as they come out on top and keep or better their position. Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ning on July 01, 2004
    I think this is going wonderfully. I can't wait for the next installment[s]!
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  • From ANON - Natalie on July 01, 2004
    I think this is actually the first time I've ever reviewed a story but I just had to tell you that I think your fic is great. I had read other fics where Draco is weela and has to lure Hermione but I can definatsay say yours is one of the best... especialy because of the relationship you have shown in the Malfoy family. So many other fic insist on the 'cold, cruel I-hate-my-family Lucius(not sure how to spell his name)' that its refreshing to see your description, which actually seems much more real than most other fics. By the way, I love your Narcissa, I actually always imagined her somewhat like that.
    Please update soon
    Natalie
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  • From ANON - Shannon on July 01, 2004
    Great so far!! Please update soon! I look forward to it!!
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  • From ANON - cat on July 01, 2004
    This fic is excellent, u r one of my favourite authors, I have read all of ur fics, I love the amazing story lines which you come up with, bloody amazing they are. I dont review often becau nev never know what to say but I absolutely love draco/hermione veela fics, when i found out that you had started one I was ecstatic, because like I have already said you are one of my favourite authors, your stories are so well written and I just know that this is going to be good, so I had to review to just let you know what a brilliant story thisturnturning out to be so far. I think the way lucius is reacting to the situation is really good, and I know what you mean about lucius only being out for himself. I'm glaat nat narcissa and lucius are accepting of the idea because it takes away the whole lucius tries to kill hermione situation which leaves more time to focus on sexy veela draco yyyuummmmmmmm lol!!! it is going to be interesting to see the interactions between narcissa, lucius and hermione, I cant wait!!!I have read to many lucius and narcissa hate hermione scenes so this story will make a refreshing change. so keep up the good work, I will be checking for updates everyday so pleeeaasseeee update soon!!!!!!!

    catxxx
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  • From ANON - Draco_Luva on July 01, 2004
    I love this story!!! Update soon!!! PLEASE?!?!?
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  • From ANON - Selene on June 30, 2004
    Cooly! very good story! it helps to read stories like this....and wow, another person who hears people talking in your head!
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  • From ANON - apparateawaydm on June 30, 2004
    i would really love if you could email me when you put up an update! i love the way this story is going..its different fro all the others but in a brilliant way! i love it!!!! its..bloody brilliant! hope u update asap!!!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on June 30, 2004
    Actually, your story doesn't necessarily need Lucius to not have gone to Azkaban. He could have gone and that would have been another reason for the ease in his defection. Lucius could have taken the imonmeonment as a reality check - he could have advised Voldemort against the Dept of Mysteries fiasco, but they wouldn't listen to him. Feeling that his position is somewhat shaky because of Bellatrix's return, and that the mad Lestranges are leading the Death Eaters 'off', Lucius might therefore take the opportunity presented to him by the Seer's prophecy to defect.

    Good chapter 2, nonetheless. I look forward to more.
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