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Reviews for Leaving Behind

By : ForcekillMiki
  • From ANON - jw on December 23, 2005
    i like it want to see were it goes
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 23, 2005
    good story, I love it, bye
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  • From ANON - Shadow Woman on December 23, 2005
    Great update!!! I am looking forward to the next chapter. Happy Holidays to you!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - manx on December 23, 2005
    This could be a good story, but you need a Beta. Your sentences are very choppy and too many words are mis-spelled or missing. Also, you don't need to describe every little tiny (or big) item that Harry purchases. Many things you go on and on and on...(you get my drift?) about are irrelevant to the story. Another thing, you, as so many authors are doing, go about making Harry's changes so drastic that most readers do not like him! The clothing is a good one, I like that. He really does need to spend money on himself. I can see him going for a tatoo and even an earring, (One!) but no matter how angry or upset he is, personality does NOT change that quickly. (I have a Psych background and raised 6 children..4 of them my own, as well as being a leader in several different youth related groups) I do have to say that I like the story line and will finish reading it.

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  • From ANON - Rayen_sama on November 04, 2005
    oh please hurry and continue the story! I actually like this one very much. A rarity lately. Encore! (did i spell that right?)
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  • From ANON - love the stiry on October 30, 2005
    love the story keep going
    u write beautifully
    dont everstop
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  • From ANON - Holly Martin on September 14, 2005
    i really like this story line and i hope that u continue with this story in the future. i cant wait to read more

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  • From ANON - Katherine on August 24, 2005
    Are you going to update this story? I hope you do. I am curious how you are going to bring Harry and Snape together. I like that Harry has a new pet. And I hope that Harry's relative
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  • From ANON - Arianna on August 22, 2005
    This story is great I love it when Harry stops being a pawn and takes control of things. I can't wait to read more. Ari
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on August 19, 2005
    Loving this so far! Please write more! ((I love how you didn't make Harry just jump into bed with Sev within the first 2 chapters))

    rock on!
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    A very intresting story. Good idea to let him get a similar trunk to the one that Moody had in the fourth book.
    I like Harry's new style very much by the way ^^. Please can you get him to wear black eyeliner? That would be goddamn hot :P
    Anyway, please keep on writing! I wanna know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Jaima on August 12, 2005
    Read the whole story today. Really enjoying it. I like a strong decisive Harry. Look forward to Harry/SEverus connection.
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  • From ANON - Colene Creevey on August 12, 2005
    This story holds good promise even though Harry is a bit OOC. However that can easily be explained by grief and maturing.
    There are also a few... not quite plot holes, but slight inconsistencies and things that I do not find quite belivable. Forinstance, one would belive that Voldemort would have spies all over Diagon Alley, and even if Harry's hair is longer he would be recognizeable to anyone who were looking for him. And one would also summarise that Albus would have his own means of keeping track of Harry. He would surely know that Harry had been to Gringott's, don't you think? Oh well, that's all minor stuff, and artistic license allows for a lot of things. The one thing I can not accept however is the use of "dollars". Harry lives in Great Britain. They do not use dollars there. Until you fix that there will be no Chocolate Covered Snape for j00. ;)
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  • From ANON - litekreem on August 11, 2005
    I like the story Harry needs to control his life not let it control him.Is this gonna be a top or bottom Harry story(I'm just curious)
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  • From ANON - E on August 11, 2005
    Hmm, wonder what'll happen next? Like it...
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