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Reviews for Leaving Behind

By : ForcekillMiki
  • From ANON - PJ on August 11, 2005
    This is a cool story. I do have one question though why did Harry have to get all those piercing and the tatoo. In most of the fics I have read where Harry "changes" he ends up in leather, piercing and tatoos. Why couldn't he just start to dress better in clothes that fit and acting more adult like or something like that why does he turn all "goth or whatever" .... just wondering to myself more about those things I guess. I really do like the story and I love the trunk that is so cool now hw can pretty much bring everything but the kitchen sink with him when he goes to school. I am glad he has decided to learn things for himself about magic and not depend on what others tell him to learn, etc. Harry really needed to take things in his own hand so to speak. It was also a nice touch about Harry's mom really being a squib and not a "muggle born" even though it shouldn't really make a difference. So he is the heir for two of th houses that is interesting. I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Harry being gone and his relatives not knowing him at all. Update again soon I look forward the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2005
    love it please update!!
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 29, 2005
    LOVE the book names, and the authors. Especially Snape, Slytherin, and Dumbledor. Will you be updating soon? I can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Griffinmusic on July 01, 2004
    I like your writing style so far. The begining is interesting, and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Silures on July 01, 2004
    The story is great so far. The story plot is a golden oldie dhundhundreds of times before, but frankly that dosen't matter it's the little things that you add into your story that count, that make the story unique. You've gotten a great start on your story but I wish the chapters were longer. A lot longer. It will moke your story better. I do like the book names the extra time you spent on the titles was in my opinion well worth it. I hope that you are Snape sympathetic because he is my all time favorite character. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Aine on July 01, 2004
    So far I like what I see. I hope that you update soon. I hate it when the updates are slow because I forget the story and end up never finishing it.
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  • From ANON - PirateDucky on June 30, 2004
    I like it! The book names are very good, and some of the authors sounded kind of funny. Update soon!
    ~Ducky~
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  • From ANON - Mimiheart on June 30, 2004
    You have a great start here. I just wish the chapters were longer. Another thing is that your sentences all have a very basic structure. This and this this. Then this and this this. Try varying them a little bit. The story plot you have has been done before, but it looks like you'll take a new perspective and this will be a great read!
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  • From ANON - chibifae on June 30, 2004
    i really want to see how this turns out! please continue!
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