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Reviews for Dragon Noir

By : agelessdrake
  • From ANON - Allison on February 21, 2005
    Wow, this is a beautiful piece of work! Very well written. You really should write more! I just about freaked when I found out it was TBC. LoL.
    Good luck with it!
    Oh! And good taste in music for the begining of chapters! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lenomdeplume (constructive crit) on July 05, 2004
    You have quite a number of typographical errors.

    You repeatedly wrote 'blonde' as 'blood' as well as a few other mistakes as well.

    Also, the accents could use a little bit of work.

    Otehr than that, it's all good.

    good luck with the next chapters

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  • From ANON - lenomdeplume on July 05, 2004
    It bothered me a lot that you didn't get any reviews.

    This is a very well-written fic. Your grammar os good, spelling is good...

    I really really enjoyed it.

    It also shocked me how accurately you described the 'black-out sensation' you experience when you starve yourself.

    Being someone who has experienced such a thing, I am offended by most stories depicting eating disorders but yours captured it very well.

    As sadistic as this may sound I am also enjoying Draco's pain. He just hurts so beautifully here.

    Thank you for sharing your story.
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