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By : DRanged691
  • From ANON - laceyweasley on September 14, 2004
    Yes! I got a new chapter. Really I love this story. Morgana/Vesper is throwing a BALANo Heo Hermione and Snape. It eases Harry's opinion. Now there's just that red-headed hot head to deal with. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - Mad_Apple on September 12, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading this, and hope you update soon. I find myself extremely curious about which house "Vesper" will be staying in, as she can't possibly remain in Gryffindor (a Snape!, in Gryffindor, Absurd!), if she is moved to Slytherin, how she as a squib would be treated by the other students... an interesting dilemna. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing such an entertaining story!
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  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on September 12, 2004
    I have to say, I am enjoying this story very much. You really have your head solidly into your characters, and I'll bet anything that this story is writing itself! Please continue, and let it flow!
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  • From ANON - June on September 12, 2004
    Wait, it says she had TWO daughters, then a few sentences later it says she had ONE daughter 17 years ago. How many daughters?
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on September 04, 2004
    I really love this chapter. I don't mean to pressure you but please don't forget, your fans.
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  • From on August 26, 2004
    Hey I like this fic it's one of the most interesting takes I've seen on this challenge. I really like your character Morgan. I'm also very relieved at how in character Dumbledore is. I hate it when people make out that he's no idea whats going on in the real world or thats he's horrible and would go nuts at the idea of Severus and Hermione together. This fic rocks.
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  • From ANON - Jami on August 26, 2004
    great story so far! i love the concept of hermione's muggle friend being introduced into the magical world. cant wait till your next posting! good luck and great job!
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  • From ANON - Gwen on August 25, 2004
    Did Snape's sister die a while ago, with her husband and only child, or is/was she alive long enought to discuss whether her two children should go to Hogwarts?

    "No, I
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  • From ANON - lacey weasley on August 24, 2004
    Tis ais a very good story. I think the addition of a third party muggle was brilliant. At the moment, yours is the first I check to see if it has been updated. Thanks
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  • From ANON - AnyuBoo on July 31, 2004
    This is a great story. I love all Snape/romance stories (hoping of course, that Snape does get romantic). :) But it's great, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kimmie on July 30, 2004
    hey, i absolutely love this story! update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - maria on July 30, 2004
    aaauuuugggghhhhh....evil evil cliffhanger....update please!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Delayed Poet *too lazy to sign in* on July 30, 2004
    Now you just wait a damned minute! How *dare* you leave that chapter off like that?! What in Merlin's name did Ron do?! I HAVE to know! While this is not the most well-written fic I've ever read it is still captivating... It is bordering on cliche *I've read waaaay too many Marriage Law fics* but you do have some "Saving Grace Plot Points" so not all is lost.... Do you have a beta? I noticed that you had a lot of grammar and spelling errors... if you don't, you should either take more time editing your chapters before posting them, or get a beta to do it for you... I'm definitely not trying to be rude at all, I'm just trying to give ya a helpful hint. It's probably why you don't hav man many reviews as you should... you have a good plot, so keep writing! Update again soon!
    .*. Tanya .*.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on July 29, 2004
    i am lovein it !!!!!!!!!plz update soon!:):):)*hugs*
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  • From ANON - droxy on July 29, 2004
    interesting chapter with the folks
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