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Reviews for Chaos Theory

By : DRanged691
  • From ANON - lacey weasley on July 13, 2004
    I love MLC and yours already has a different twist. A muggle in the mix. You write and I'll review. It's very interesting so far.

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  • From ANON - droxy on July 13, 2004
    some word context errors, but nothing big.

    not sure what you want to do with Morgan the OC other than be a friend to hg. I like OCs so I am interested in what role is planned, given she is a muggle. Will she be subjected to the marriage law as well as a ward of SS?

    chapter 4 is the nbest so far with a cliffy and SS announcement

    SS is nicely done and so is HG.
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  • From ANON - Kiki on July 13, 2004
    I'm addicted to your story! I love the new character, Morgan and I love how you write Snape to be. Please keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - June W on July 13, 2004
    Lucky Morgana! She just lost her family, but now she gets to the be the only Muggle at Hogwarts. At least she'll have Hermione as a friend. Hmm, wonder if that's why Severus offered to sponsor her? Will Morgana now be using glamour clarms to hide her identity from Death Eater kids? She's supposed to be dead, so this will be tricky to hide her at Hogwarts. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From on July 10, 2004
    This is good. I can't believe that you're not getting more reviews for this! I hope that you continue your story because you've got something good with this one.

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2004
    There is something really funky going on with the spacing of your story. At the top and bottom is all symbols, somhow it has double spaced itself and you have to scroll to the right to read the whole thing. Maybe you accidentally did some HTML or another code that is making it do this. You should try to look into it because it makes the story very hard to read and most people won't review a story that is hard to read or they may flame it.
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  • From ANON - Jilly on July 08, 2004
    God I REALLY hate this story. I can't believe I wasted my time even reading it...
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on July 03, 2004
    Uh Oh, I think I would scream too if I saw some stranger in my house. Well, it happend with my brother ;-) ! Could Snape be the stranger (please)? Did he travelly fly floo and if yes, why is the Granger fireplace in the floo network? I like your beginning 'cause you do not see Hermione's muggle life very often! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Mattia on July 03, 2004
    I like it. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - June W on July 02, 2004
    This is a not a good sign ... only your first chapter and you're already leaving us on a clingernger! Please update soon -- must find out who the man is in Hermione's living room.
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  • From ANON - FlamingosByNight on July 02, 2004
    Good start. I like it. Now I'm waiting in suspense as to who's in the living room. I think I may have an idea... I'll just have to wait and see.
    Keep Writing
    FlamingosByNight
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