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Reviews for Snape's Discovery

By : BreeMcGregor
  • From ANON - Irene on July 30, 2004
    That was awesome! ""What are your intentions towards me?""I loved that, this was really good.
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  • From ANON - Moyra on July 29, 2004
    Hey, that was fantastical great fun!! I loughed out loud several times: Severus discovering the HG/SS-fanfics in the Net, or JKR as grand grand grand daughter of Dumbledore - one of the best jokes.
    I
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2004
    Super cute and yummy ending!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on July 29, 2004
    'Tis a lovely story m'girl!! Hope ye write many mur like it! hehe Really....I do hope you wrote more like this one. It was a delightful tale!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2004
    Steamy ending! OO!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on July 21, 2004
    It's a very nice chappie and leaves you hanging. Can't wait till the next!!
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on July 21, 2004
    Love it! Love it! Love it!!! I laugh, smile and get totally turned on in one chapter!! Fabulous as always!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Talene on July 16, 2004
    How wonderful! I can't wait to read more!! More soon ploease?
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  • From ANON - Star Fire on July 16, 2004
    This is a really good start!! I can't wait for more, please please update soon.. This and Twin Link, I love both stories, you are doing a great job on both!!! Keep up the AWESOME work!!!! Happy Writing!

    Star Fire
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  • From ANON - OzRatbag2 on July 03, 2004
    Interesting story, but given that I know SOUL SEARCHING by Quillusion very well, this seems very much a take off of that story. There is also reference to LeoGryffin's - THE MUGGLE (particularly the internet research components) smattered ugh ugh this first chapter as well. The Muggle references are a little more vague and they have been done by other authors as well, but the idea of the WIKTT Archives being use hig highlight SS/HG stories has been done (by Quillusion - the story is here at AFF.Net and very well known) and though there are only a certain number of possible combinations of plots, to follow with a story that whilst not directly the same; but one that uses so many similar themes, should include the original author/s as the idea behind the story.

    Your story summary did intrigue me enough to click the link, but your grammar is also a little odd. Are you trying to write this in 2nd or 3rd person because if so, it's all very jumbled? You need to decide on a voice and stick to it or better still, find a good beta reader who can help you whip this into shape.

    If you are going to continue with this idea, you do need to acknowledge Quillusion's Soul Searching, ditch the idea of highlighting certain author's stories and make it more generic.

    This was never meant as a flame, but as constructive critique.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on July 02, 2004
    I like it, great read. Look forward to more. Thanks.
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