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Reviews for Blood of the Virgin Witch

By : selened
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 08, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From MythDouglas on July 27, 2008
    I liked it a lot. I especially liked the loss of innocence for the ritually being consented pleasure, not just breaking the hymen. It would nice to read another epilogue with what happens after. I understand why you refrain from doing so, it is really hard not to make it corny. Severus and Hermione still/could speak to Luscious, Severus and Hermione needed to visit her parents, their actual wedding, where they end up career wise, having a child, trials of the Death Eaters: Severus and Luscious must prove their innocence, and everyone returning from the final battle. I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

    Witch Myth
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  • From LadyofClunn on November 30, 2007
    Wow! If that is PWP, then what will it be like when you sit down to write a full blown epic? Your own recreation of "War And Peace"? Please, do absolutely try!

    I really, really like this. Why doesn
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Aleksandra on February 04, 2005
    I love the fic! I was suprised to see that it was 16 chapters and not 3, but hey, pleasant suprise. I enjoyed the plot and your writing style ^^

    Thanks for writing ^^

    ~Alik
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on December 06, 2004
    WHEW! I just read the entire story in one sitting and for a few minutes there I thought I had lost my mind. It took me longer than usual to catch on to the fact that there is a chapter out of place. What a relief! I thought I had finally fried my brain from reading too much smut. ( Really great smut at that!) This was a fantastic fic. I loved the story line. Very original and tying it all to Merlin was really clever. I am now moving on to more of your fics. I have truly enjoyed your work and I look forward to reading more of it.* Kudos* on a great fic!
    Jaimie
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  • From ANON - selened on November 24, 2004
    The story is finished. At the moment no sequel is planned. I have a WIP which is almost finished and I have two more addtions to the Marriage Vows series.
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  • From ANON - Tracy on November 23, 2004
    I like this story, but you haven't updated in a long time. Are you going to ever finish it? I hope that you do.
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  • From ANON - Carrie on October 14, 2004
    I loved this story! I hope you do post a sequel, that isif you haven't already!
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  • From ANON - Toni on August 23, 2004
    Love your stories, have read all the way through this, Marriage Vows, and waiting eagerly for the next part of Love & Parenthood.

    Nice to see someone who is, finally, using UK grammar, spellings and slang terms - I just can't imagine anyone that is part of the world of Harry Potter saying things like "You're getting pissed" unless they were referring to alcohol!

    Much as I would love to see you posting every day, I understand you are now working from your live journal, so please do update when you can, and I will wait patiently for the next installment - even if I can't wait to see what happens next :)

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - selened on August 11, 2004
    The word grotty is a perfectly valid english word. It is not an exact synonym for groggy as it means unwell rather than tired but there are places where either would suffice. My spellings follow the English traditions and are acceptable to my spell checker. I am prone to typing errors especially with punctuation but that is down to a rather dodgy keyboard and the fact that I studied English at Oxford and not typing.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on August 07, 2004
    Good work! Keep up the good work. P.S. Spell check!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on August 07, 2004
    Uh, grotty? Was this a type-o? The word is GROGGY as in "I am feeling GROGGY and wish to go to bed." Sorry to sound bitchy. But I just couldn't get past that one without thinking, "Shit, am I the only one that reads fanfiction that has taken an English course who has still retained what they learned?" Sometimes, it feels just that way. Like now.
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