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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse

By : Jackalman
  • From ANON - destiny black on February 15, 2005
    Hey, I like your story.It's really good. Seeing a nice Dudley was a fresh change, but I have one objection. Harry's profane use (I'm only up to chapter 12 and I saw it at least once) of the word Jesus Christ. I 'm a good Christian, and I love HP, hell I even write my own fanfic, but to use our Lord and Savior's name in HP is really wrong. There should be a seperation, at least IMO. Like the people in HP world (canon correct or not) even mention Jesus, God, or the devil?I mean, to them it doesn't exist.I know I can chose to take it or leave it, but hey it's a review.You can always delete it, if you don't like it. I just think it gives HP a bad name when you try to incorporate Jesus, even by using his name, in vain. Does Harry REALLY KNOW about Christianity?I'd think not. More Snape,please?He's too great to be left out. And I'm glad that Umbridge got what was coming to her. Hah hah hah.
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  • From ANON - tasha on February 08, 2005
    hope there is more!:)
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  • From on February 04, 2005
    This is so good. One of the best fan fictions I read in a long time. PLEASE update really soon, I cant wait to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - dan on February 02, 2005
    I think this is a awsome fic!
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  • From ANON - pat on January 30, 2005
    Really good..cant wait for the next chapters
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  • From ANON - darien on January 29, 2005
    lovin the story
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  • From ANON - tasha on January 28, 2005
    This is story is geting better and better...but i am lucky i figured out that you moved the story to adult fanfiction...when i couldent find it i thought that u ended it but then i figured it out! YAY GO ME! lol
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  • From on January 26, 2005
    Great story, I so loved it. Please update soon, cant wait to find out what happens.

    K
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  • From on January 25, 2005
    I absolutely loved your story. I had to tear myself away, just go to work, or go to bed. It was the only story I read all week, so I wouldn't get distracted. Please e-mail me when you update again. I can't wait to read more.


    Jeannette
    arhpss34@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Klavian on January 20, 2005
    I think that it should be a permenant Harry/hermione/Ginny pairing. Oh and good job on a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Brian McCrary on January 20, 2005
    I was very glad to see an update of this; it's a very unique story on AFF.Net, an NC-17 story, loaded with sexuality and kink, and still written with a detailed and complex plot that would be a pleasure to read even if the overall content was edited down to something that FF.Net would accept. It also has that rarest of things in fanfic these days, a new approach to the relationship between Harry and Hermione, with a truly fascinating blending of dominant/submissive behavior, not in any sort of sadomasochistic manner, but with each of them assuming the position (no pun intended) that is the best for them psychologically.

    I admit to having been worried about the fallout over Ginny's planned use of Polyjuice Potion, but you handled that quite well. I can't wait to see what Ron's reaction will be. Well done as always!
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on January 19, 2005
    Glad you've been able to update again.

    Two very hot, very interesting parts

    I like how H & H are dealing with Ginny, she really needs the help they're giving her.

    More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Jackalman on January 15, 2005
    Heyoo

    Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse will go on, soon.

    A lot has been happening lately. I've devoted some of my time to actually trying to publish an original work which I have sent off to half a dozen publishers so far in Canada. It's a short story of a character I'm fleshing out for a full sized novel. No title for the novel, yet, but you've already seen the character in Harry Potter and The Secret Nurse. It's Catherine O'Hara, a witch who solves crimes and mysteries.

    If you want to read it, the beta version of the first short story is on;

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2203863/1/

    And on mugglenet

    http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=8732

    Very nice of Mugglenet to post the story, since it's actually named "The Mugglenet Murder" A story that's supposed to take place in RL about an obsessed Harry Potter fan who commits an act of murder. I rewrote the story for serious publication and removed all trace of J K Rowling's universe. I wanted this to be a completely original venture of my own universe. It's based greatly on the Wicca religion as it is in RL so I've been doing A LOT of research lately. Reading books, playing with Tarot cards, fiddling with crystals and actually attempting scrying. Very big world this, it's taking a lot of my time.

    And I'm also attempting to learn how to write mysteries, which is in itself a gigantic world of learning. Loads of reasearch, lots of books to read.

    Good news about HP and the Secret Nurse. Some changes at work allow me to work at home which will allow for much more free time to carry on with the story. Loads more planned, I haven't hit a brick wall. I know where the story is going. I just needed a fresh approach after writing over 400 pages of material. I think this ought to round out at 600 to 800 pages in total. The next two chapters next week at the latest, and there's still material I wrote last summer to work in.

    Jackalman

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  • From ANON - bob on January 14, 2005
    great story hope you write more REAL SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on January 09, 2005
    Very good, very hot story.

    I do hope you're going to update soon.
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