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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse

By : Jackalman
  • From doorock42 on January 05, 2005
    This is, without a doubt, the funniest thing I have read on AFF -- in fact, it's the funniest fanfic I've read since I last went through Gina Dartt's archives. And I'm only in the sixth chapter.

    Excellent work, good characterization. But even if there were flaws, I'd miss them in all the humor.

    "Make with the bouncy bouncy." Worthy of Family Guy, that one.
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  • From ANON - Mellyissa on December 23, 2004
    I am still slightlu confused who the secret nurse is but I really love the sotry cant wait for more
    Melissa
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  • From ANON - Jackalman on December 22, 2004
    Author's note.

    Two things;

    This tale has Hedwig as a male AND takes place in the modern world intentionally for reasons that will turn up much later in the story. This was not a mistake I made at first and it was too late to correct later. I can't go into details as to why, but I promise it all will become clear.

    Also, this may be the last time I'll publish two chapters at a time for a while. Unless I scrape up some free time over the holidays. If I get fired from my job, which I'm kind of counting on and collect E.I., hell, I'll have the free time to do three chapters a week at least.


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  • From ANON - Muirnin on December 22, 2004
    First off I have to say this has been a fantastic adventure. I do hope you are continuing to write this... I started reading this on ff.net but ironically chapter 15 was missing and the story had only gone to chapter 16... I had read in one of the yahoogroups about this story being here and sought it out so I could continue reading it...

    I was amazed at how good it was and at times I laughed my arse off...

    Other then the fact that you have dated the story too far into our time frame (It would only be 1996 for them right now) my biggest complaint is the fact that Hedwig is in actuality a female not a male... I know that is probably a really stupid nit to pick but all the same it's something that bugs me...

    Anyway... Please continue on with this story and I would love to have this story posted on my yahoogroup Muirnins_Musings as it is a delightful read...

    As Always,
    Muirnin
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 18, 2004
    i sort of liked this last chapter. it was a neat idea about explaining how hermione first became feral and even how she changed back waaaay back in second year. the thing that troubled me was how sexual it was. they were only 12! i know, even 12 yr olds get sexually aroused, but i just think it could have been handled in a more... innocent way. anyway, i look forward to the next couple chapters.
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  • From oldwolf on December 18, 2004
    Very nice chaptes, though I'll admit to wishing for a look in on Hermione's session with the Nurse. I don't think Harry's going to sleep easy for a while, not while knowing Tim and his friends are up to the same tricks as Harry was during his first year.
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  • From ANON - TrixRStrange on December 18, 2004
    Thanks for the continual e-mails... I love getting those and then going "WHOOOT he's got a new chapter up!" It's that one subject line that'll make a persons day, instead of reading 'buy v1agra online! No scrip needed'. Anyways... keep up the great writing and can't wait for another chapter/e-mail.

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From oldwolf on December 15, 2004
    Awesome set of chapters. I do have one little question that may have fallen by the wayside. Did Hermione ever start using the buttplugs?
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 12, 2004
    what a revolting development. poor hermione. there will be hell to pay when they find the culprit. it's probably tim, just to throw everyone for a loop lol. and i was thinking who the mystery rider was, seems quite comical if my assumption is correct. i am kind of flabbergasted (love that word) that harry was allowed back on the quidditch team. he should be on it, don't get me wrong, but if he had to pass a physical, he shouldn't be. i mean everyone at hogwarts would know his condition and you had pomfrey and hooch do the exam. hard to believe they would pass him. can't wait to see what's in store next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2004
    Love the story so far... Just want to give some warning, becareful with side plots (the picture plot, etc) as you can get to far into them and it will be hard to get back to the other plots you have laid out (harry/hermione, butt plugs, harry's teaching, ron/luna, etc)
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  • From ANON - Jackalman on December 10, 2004
    Just so everyone knows, there IS a Hermione/Ginny/Harry three way coming up. And it's just a first of a tour-de-force of three ways coming. Unfortunately you're going to have to wait until chapter 30 before it starts. The next chapter 25 and 26 will be up this weekend (barring technical problems of the site). "The Muggle Town of Hogsby" where some serious shit stirs up involving Hermione's breasts. And "Witch Hunt", trouble brews when muggles seek to expose the magical world!

    Two chapters per week will be published until further notice, well past chapter 30 at this point I can promise,

    What's coming

    The Secret Nurse returns

    A missing chapter involving the history of Harry Potter and Hermione Granger from year two.

    And Harry must deal with the secret of why he's stuck a furry in Otherworld and what he must do to return to normal

    All this and a bucket of sodomy coming up in;

    "Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse"
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on December 10, 2004
    Very good and interesting story.

    I'm kind of hopeing for Harry/Hermione/Ginny, but mostly I'm just hoping you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - Klavian on December 04, 2004
    Umm... Is Ginny going to end up with Harry and Hermione? Or is she gonna end up with someone else (cheering for Harry/ginny/Hermione
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on November 26, 2004
    hey there. long time no review. you have an epic story in the making. ch. 22 and they have their first dada class. it's a long way to go before they face voldemort, i would say. it seems harry was out of sorts this chapter, but you definitely dropped hints for upcoming things. the guitar bit at the end was interesting, if out of the blue. i have to wonder what that has to do with the plot but hopefully you'll let us in on the secret soon. 'what's up with the cat bit?' seems to be a little running gag in otherworld, and a mystery. why is harry a cat there? too many questions! i look forward to the answers.
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  • From ANON - jhaymar on November 20, 2004
    Once again, good chapter, more like a smooth transition for the what's coming next. Great read so far.

    Only problem is that Cho is in seventh year, not sixth, so she could not be in the same class as the rest of the gang or else you need a good explanation for it. If you ever needa beta for your work, I would be glad to volunteer.

    congratulations
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