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By : Jackalman
  • From Jackalman on November 19, 2004
    Whoops! I got Parvati and Pansy mixed up! Correction made, thank you for the oversight. Obviously it couldn't be Pansy because Slytherins are not in the same class this year (thank god).

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  • From ANON - Rex on November 19, 2004
    "What are you looking at?" Ron asked as he pulled back his robe to expose his prefect's badge, "No lounging around the halls. And put that rag away, Pansy, or it's five points from Gryffindor.
    ^SHould be slytherin
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  • From ANON - TrixRStrange on November 19, 2004
    Allo love, great new chapter!! What I wouldn't give to have that bracelet for the real world and that charm to get to the other world... *low whistle*....*shifty eyes* anyways *clears throat*. Can't wait for a new chapter and thanks for teh e-mails!

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - Heero_YuyZ on November 08, 2004
    As a birthday gift or something, Harry should try to turn himself into a cat anthromagi like her, to liven up their sex life. I want cat!harry to go with cat!hermione! It would be neat!
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  • From ANON - Jackalman on November 08, 2004
    Thanks for that enormous oversight of mine.

    WARNING:

    Continuity change coming from author. Chapter 19 is going to have to be rewritten for Angelina to be taken out. Or some explaination put in for why she's still there, er war way, the present version has to go.

    Just so you know, there was a continuity change back in Chapter 3, I took Hermione's home out of Brighton and put it in Wales. I based that location soley on the fact that when Hagrid first delivered Harry to the Dursleys in Surrey, he said Harry fell asleep over Bristol. If you draw a straight line from Surrey to Bristol and keep going, you land in Wales. Wales is pretty big so it could still be one of a million places in there where she could live.
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  • From ANON - jhaymar on November 08, 2004
    Great story. Much more plot tha usual on this site.

    As it is H/Hr, you would probably get many more reviews on www.portkey.org;

    I would guess Ginny was brewing polyjuice potion to get into Harry's bed... future harem or major Fubar in perspective???

    Small mistake in the last chapter; Angelina is supposed to have graduated. Only Katie Bell is left of the three chasers (Alicia, Angelina, Katie).

    Thanks for your great .jh.
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  • From oldwolf on October 28, 2004
    Absolutly awesome so far. The story seems to hve that little something extra the seperates a good story from a great story. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - xhale on October 28, 2004
    holy shit, dude! one of the rare and precious few unique plots I've ever read in HP fandon. Keep it up!

    I don't know if you have an update list, but if you do, please add me to it!
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  • From ANON - REX on October 23, 2004
    Update this is a great story but u are taking way to long between updates
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  • From ANON - Brian McCrary on October 23, 2004
    Definitely one of the best reads I've come across in quite a while; I sat down and read through the entire thing in one sitting! The idea of Hermione going feral like that was a treat, as well as all the kinks it created. What's even more remarkable, there's a very wwritwritten plot underlying the adult portions of the sotry. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - trixrstrange on October 21, 2004
    Great FF, I've enjoyed reading the development between the pairings throughout the chapters. Keep up the great work!!

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on September 23, 2004
    I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how Heremione wouldn't let Harry feel sorry for hisself. I laughed when Crookshanks tried to pull hisself to the attic in the Dumdwaiter. That reminded of Sylvester & Twiity cartoons. Especiallly when the rope broke.
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  • From ANON - Frank on September 18, 2004
    Great story! I hope you write soon a Harry/Hermione/Ginny threesome, poor Ginny is suffering, she deserves some cock
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  • From ANON - NotSoSaintly on September 05, 2004
    Wow. To tell you the truth, I did not expect to get into this story when I started it. You certainly kept my interest. Sort of like a fantasy version of Harry Potter...I like it. I hope you live up to your promise of a chapter a week. I've saved it in my favorites. I'm dying to know who the "nurse" really is. And I hope you incorporate a little more of the non-professorial Snape as he hangs around Order headquarters. It's a bit like comic relief. Not that I need any relief! :)
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  • From Jackalman on September 04, 2004
    Hello.

    The Author . J. Just thought I'd let you all know how the story is progressing. The reason it's taking so long is I'm planning to publish this one chapter per week. The last chapter "Summer Lovers/Some are Lovers" got way out of hand was was turning out to be 30 pages long. So I chopped it up into smaller chapters averaging 10 to 13 pages each.

    I could publish the other chapters right now, but logistically I'm worried about a conflict and want some things worked out a few chap ahe ahead before I publish a finale version of the next chapter, which BTW is titled "The Basement of Black". Just what the heck did the fasmily keep in that basement anyway? Where the hell did all those Doxies come from? And Harry and Hermione are forced to come clean about the death of Voldemort.

    I'm sorry it's taking so long for the story to come out, but the good news is with the plotting I've worked out from working so far ahead in the story, I'm gauranteeinu'reu're going to be seeing new and fresh stuff every week. Try to think of it as a serial. Also, I can gaurantee that a few chapters coming up will be much longer than the most recent publications. Let me give you a few previews as to what's coming up.

    Harry sponsors a student at Hogwarts.

    There's a rescue mission to save the train to Hogwarts from sabotage.

    A new and special inter-house tournament will be planned at Hogwarts in the spring, just before the Quiddich cup.
    e see see the magical "other world" that Rowling promised in the last book, but never really delivered.

    We see who the new Auror instructors are, and the new (and sexy) head of Slytherin is.

    And what role will the secret nurse play at Hogwarts?

    That, and a lot more all coming up in Harry Potter and the secret Nurse.
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