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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse

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  • From ANON - REX on September 04, 2004
    More please and how come it akes so llong to update
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  • From ANON - Camilla on August 30, 2004
    Fascinating. The whole geekiness of it ... fascinating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2004
    Very strange story. Also, precum tastes salty but cum tastes kind of bitter. They say certain foods affect the taste, though. *shrug*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2004
    Maybe you should at the start of each chapter point people to the Beta you wrote, because I read this first then looked for more of your stories and found that story and it explained the background to the biting, the secret feelings that Herm holds for Harry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2004
    A very good story, but there are minor plot holes, the biggest being the fact that the love between Hermionie and Harry just happened to appear in about one chapter, but other than that the rest so minor that they are not worth bothering about too much, since your story is written very well. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Rex on August 20, 2004
    I liked Chaptar Ten just not the over kill of furry so cut it down next chapter please
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2004
    Please update soon... Your chapters are nice and long which is a bonus... but i definitely wantt to see more and soon! This story is cool... thus far i have enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see it progress into the hogwarts school year and also what Minerva and Hermione are planning

    Keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Rex on August 15, 2004
    Keep i9t going man how soonf ro chapter ten
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  • From ANON - melissa on July 14, 2004
    Wow I really enjoy this fanfic alot. its a great idea and most importantly so much fun to read and absolutly great job.
    Cant wait for More
    Melissa
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  • From ANON - looneylupin on July 13, 2004
    I think this story is great, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on July 02, 2004
    this was a good story, but it could have been a lot better. there were some plot points that just didn't sit well with me and might have been more thought out. you explained dudley's role pretty well. at first i had to question that aspect of your story. it just seemed to out of character. i liked how it was true love that would win the war. i figure that's how it should end for jkr too, but for book six? harry and hermione's relationship seemed very far advanced for sixth year. at the end of book five they were not that close. it would have been cool for harry to discover how much he loved hermione through your story. the little figures of the trio would have been a great example of how far they could go. have hermione a bit embarrassed by the toys actions. have their love grow deeper as the story unfolded. the whole thing with the biting was just silly in my opinion. it made for a pretty intriguing kinkiness for hermione but instead of biting which is a violent act in itself, the real way to defeat voldemort should have been the ultimate expression of love from our two heroes. considering what site we on, on, it would have made more sense to defeat voldemort with sex instead of biting. i did like the idea of voldemort taking control of harry and trying tove hve him into depression and i really liked how hermione tried to heal harry but some of his scars just wouldn't heal. even though this is a pretty critical review, you should know that for the most part the story was well done. i just didn't agree with how some of the situations were handled.
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