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Reviews for The Fine Line

By : Andreas
  • From Alyssa611 on February 13, 2008
    HAHAHA OMG,When I read the line Off to be a wizard, the most wonderful wizard of all, I actually read it in tune to the Yello Brick road song. We must have been mentally linked at the moment. : ) (not that i'm saying my mental capacity is anywhere near yours. I could never write something this amazing)
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  • From ANON - jessica on September 08, 2005
    fuck me that was fantabulous! inspired really, you are a genius. props.
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  • From tragicsleep on July 12, 2005
    damn. you are definitively one of the most developed and amazing writers i have yet encountered. i love the way you put forth draco's personality,all the little sides that make him who he is: that is what brings depth to a story. the rose's thorns kind of made me cringe (not a blood-fanatic i am) but other than that i love love LOVED it! now i'll move on to read some more of your brilliant work. xxx

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  • From ANON - Reba Williams on April 06, 2005
    Wow, just wow... I mean, damn WOW!

    and of course, thank you - for giving that to us!

    Reba
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  • From ANON - Zentiis on March 24, 2005
    very intense and well written, great work! Your desriptions were wonderful, i'm honestly very impressed ^^
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  • From DrapedInBlack on January 17, 2005
    I loved it! Very well written. The sarcasm and witty combacks were perfect. And I loved the vocabulary use and how you portrayed them both. Amazing. Keep up the good work!

    -Black
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  • From ANON - Dadella on January 07, 2005
    Speaking of amazing...
    BLOODY BRILLIANT! comes to mind...

    I LOVE your vocabulary... Your writing style... Your vision...
    The entire thing is just... BEAUTIFUL!

    I'm definately counting this as a favourite...
    it was so... RICH... It had me laughing, it had me somberly mesmerized by their emotions... It had me angry at their stubborness...

    ...
    so...
    powerful...

    in one word?: WOW

    *an amazingly LOUD round of applause ensues, considering it's just one person, here, clapping*
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  • From ANON - Shame Ness on January 05, 2005
    I thought that it was rather nice, and am sad that it has ended. but life shall go on.

    aj
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  • From ANON - Rousy_P on January 04, 2005
    *Blink* Is it just me or there's something wrong with this posting? There're some coding errors (words linking together, blurs of letters that mean nothing at all...) and then there's:
    Ah, Granger. Hangs about like a bookish terridoesdoesn't she?

    Of love?

    What was it they said? There's a fine line between love and hate? But, surely, that was just
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  • From ANON - AoiGensou on August 29, 2004
    Wow. Just wow. That was... incredible. Possibly one of the best Harry/Draco stories I have /ever/ read. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Blue Dragon of the Mystics on July 21, 2004
    You are an absolute God of Fanfiction. This has got to be the absolute best HP fanfic I have ever read in my life, really. Your writing is wonderfully elegant. I was enthralled to the very end and a brillant conclusion it was. I just wanted to tell you that your effort was most definitely not wasted. Thank you for the giggles and smiles.
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  • From DemonBlaze on July 06, 2004
    That was really good. the metaphor of the fine line and then a more visual, actual fine line was a creative genious idea.
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  • From ANON - Adrienne on July 04, 2004
    I couldn't wait to review this so I didn't go and sign in. Brilliantly written. So often with fics lots of young writers come in and write fics with very basic language and no character depth, but you...you (though i have no idea what age you are, it doesn't matter) came in and wrote a story with suprising depth and lovely characterization. I am astounded and that was only one chapters. Very awesome job, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Yana on July 04, 2004
    awwwwww that was sooo sweet
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on July 04, 2004
    Wow. That was amazing, extermely intense(sp?). It is so well crafted, the words used the personalities fit wonderfully, everything seemed amazingly real almost. I read the frist half before I went to work and the second half later and I wasn't disappointed at all. The whole time I was at work I kept think about this story. It truly a work of art. Kudos. I can't wait to read more stuff done by you.
    PAP
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