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Reviews for Retreat - Act I: Occupation

By : Andreas
  • From ANON - Alison on February 07, 2006
    Agh! You can't leave us hanging like that! With Draco dead, no word from Harry and Arthur in Africa!! PLEASE update soon!!

    Great story! =o)
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 23, 2005
    Holy moly! Draco is dead? Inspector Strange is on the side of the Origin? What does this Julia person have to do with things? Where is Harry Potter?
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  • From ANON - crystal on July 23, 2005
    Wow.. Fascinating~ @____@ Great writing too, i just hope draco isn't really dead? And him being an origin was interesting.. But when is harry going to appear? H/D action?
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on July 23, 2005
    Well. I. Wow.

    I have no words. You have stolen them. Completely. At first, I thought this story was just too complicated and advanced for a fanfic, which is probably why it took me so long to get into it. After all, it *did* take me nearly two hours to just read until the end of chapter eight. But I must admit... this was entirely worth it!

    This is, indeed, an incredible story. I am most looking forward to seeing where you manage to go from here, because I am MOST intruiged. I am also absolutely completely anxious to see what happened to Harry, and whether or not Draco is all right. I certainly hope you didn't kill him. -_- He's my favourite character, after all. And what exactly does Dumbledore want with Lucius. Assuming, of course, that it *is* Dumbledore. It seems his style. :D

    I anxiously await your updates!
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  • From DemonBlaze on July 23, 2005
    the chapters (7-8) were wonderful. I really love this story. The concept you have is very interesting and I cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on May 26, 2005
    This story confuses me. There is too much going on. Where's the slash and who is it with? Harry is not there and doesn't seem to be appearing any time soon and Hermoine seems to be interested in Ron, Draco and this Terry guy so who is going to be with whom?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 19, 2005
    Chapter 7 should be interesting. How will they stop them?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 18, 2005
    Something tells me this all has to do with Harry and Dumbledore being gone. Where are they? Hermione is becoming obsessed with Draco herself.
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  • From ANON - Faith on July 25, 2004
    this is a very good story. your the first story on adultfanfiction i've ever reviewed. i never felt the need to before hand but wow this is really good. i hope you update soon. and just wondering is there harry/draco in the future?? or is this placed in the character for something other then romance between the two?
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  • From ANON - Manny on July 09, 2004
    i really like this story but it's so frustrating, everytime i think hermione is going to die WHAM she comes back. i was like 'OH NO, the know it all survived'. sorry for my morbidness but im one of those people that love to see the characters they like the least get done in. i really like this story. please please please update soon
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