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Reviews for A Game of You

By : HarliquinPiper
  • From ANON - rubberduck on July 04, 2004
    what, you expected to leave it like that? of course you should continue. there shouldn't have even been a question. i must say, i didn't like how it ended. with hermione crying i mean. i can understand her confusion though. she's apparently in love with ron, but in lust with draco, and has to act it out with harry. what a tangled web she weaves. i would very much like to see how harry and her interact with ron. it would be interesting to know how they hide something like that from their best friend. also, draco's reaction needs to be explored. it would be nice to see all three guys develop feelings for hermione and then let the best man win. it's just up to interpretation about who the best man is. who's your pick?
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  • From ANON - Sevfan on July 04, 2004
    Wow! You should so continue this! I'd very much like to see Hermione's fantasies come true.
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  • From ANON - robin on July 04, 2004
    wow this could totaly be a several chap fic it leavs the endig open to so many wonderful senearios varry good for your first story
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on July 04, 2004
    For your frist story it was really good. I do believe you should contiue the story. Although I'm a little lost on why Harry would just give in to her like that....that should be explained a little more or better. I like your style and they way you have put things together. I really can't wait to read more by you. Kudos and Good Luck!
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