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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    I just have to say.... woah.
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  • From ANON - wolfen on May 14, 2005
    This story was very good. The emotional component was very well written. I know you said this was a one shot, but you have certainly laid the groundwork for a very intriquing longer story. Who was the informant? How would Snape and Hermione deal with this incident in the future? Does Snape love Hermione? What were his motivations in helping her (he is a Slytherin after all). Please consider continuing this.
    Cheers,
    wolfen
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  • From ANON - Elayne on May 14, 2005
    This was a beautiful story. Brought tears to my eyes.
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  • From ANON - bellasol67 on May 13, 2005
    Loved this...so intense...this would have been perfect even without the sex...great job.
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  • From ANON - Patatita on May 13, 2005
    Very good story. Pasionate, full of wonderfull descriptions of emotions, scenes and the dialoge it's fantastic. Lovely style. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - CMW on May 12, 2005
    What an incredibly unpleasant story. It is, however, wonderfully written, wonderfully imagined and very, very interesting. I would like to know if he is the traitor
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2004
    Excellent story!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on July 05, 2004
    Brilliant and sad. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Corazon on July 05, 2004
    Very nice job. I thoroughly enjoyed this and could see a full story being written from it.
    If you should find the time to continue this, please email me. I would be most
    interested in reading it. You have captured Snape's character in such a way that
    makes him still very dangerous and very mysterious. Bravo!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From ANON - Adriana on July 05, 2004
    Very compelling! You perfectly captured the desperation of the moment. For a PWP it was quite good. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - americanpie28 on July 04, 2004
    i loved this story. it's a wonderful setup for a longer work of fiction and i think you'll do very well at it. i'll keep my eye out for more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Titania on July 04, 2004
    This was most excellent! I hope that this isn't a one shot, it's too good to stop here. Very well done !!! Bravo!

    Live long and prospTitaTitania
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  • From ANON - Innogen on July 04, 2004
    I loved this story. I hope you write more...I know you said that it is just Hermione's point of view. I hope the Severus isn't the informant. I suspect that Severus suspect Hermione as the informant though...if it's not himself. If you write from his point of view, please continue on this thread. then you can alternate! That would be so awesome!

    Innogen
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on July 04, 2004
    Very well written. Very bittersweet.
    Was Severus trying to tell Hermione that he was the leak and that she shouldn't trust him? I'm guessing.
    Had the feeling that Severus had a stronger emotional attachment to Hermione than he was comfortable with.

    I look forward to your future works.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on July 04, 2004
    That was a wonderfully written story. The way it ended, it seems as though you don't intend to continue on with it. I sincerely hope that's not the case. It was greatly a pleasure reading it...
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