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Reviews for Should Have Been

By : Rochelle
  • From yeagerbomb on April 03, 2009
    well...
    this is really interesting. i'm enjoying it so far, but some parts are a little unclear to me. in chapter three (i think), there seemed to be a paragraph or two missing between sirius going into siri's painting room and remus explaining what happened between him and sirius's family. also, there are a lot of errors in this. spelling and such. i think it's the formatting, not you, but it's very distracting and i have to guess at words.
    hmm... as much as i was enjoying the fluffiness, Dark Stories are some of my favorites, right up there with Grievously Angst-Ridden and Helplessly Romantic. i hope you keep writing, because i would love to read more. siri is sweet, though the whole vampire-thing is...weird. anyway...yeah. keep writing and posting, and i'll be back for more!~
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  • From ANON - ananomuse on January 25, 2005
    I hate to say this but there are alot of time where i have to guess what you are trying to type,its almost like you are making up words
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on August 29, 2004
    Perhaps you're trying to compensate for the fact that the story is almost over, but posting the same chapter twice isn't exactly what I call a subtle space filler. ;) Quickly upload the real chapter eight and I'll forgive you for getting me all exited over nothing.

    hugs,
    Padfoot.
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  • From ANON - Pinky on August 23, 2004
    Love the story so much. I like how you put so much thought into the plot. Makes me look like a real slacker cause all I write is smut. Its also one of my favorite pairings in the whole wide world. If its not to much trouble could you e-mail me when you up date that would be great. Keep on writing, and if you geta chance please read my fics that are posted on the site. Thanks so much.Till I review agian.
    Cheers, Pinky
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  • From Padfoot on August 20, 2004
    Oh! This is really good and really well-written. Although I hate the thought of Remus and Snape, I love Remus and Sirius, which outbalances it. ;) Please update soon!
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  • From on August 15, 2004
    I loved this story and i love that name Sirius Cerberus Lupin. ^_^
    I agree Snape was being quite unfair by cng Mng Moony a Whore but still thats Snape for you.

    Remus/Sirius is my third fav pairing after Ron/Harry, Harry/Draco and Snape/Lucius, anyway it was great, the way you captured Remus' and Sirius' feelings in a realistic way rather than the NORMAL happly ever after ending was excellant.

    *+*KittyQ*+*

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  • From ANON - shamanogler on July 31, 2004
    well i never read the old version so i dont know what i have missed,.....but i would just like to add my encouragement to carry on with this one. it is a lovely story so far and i really like siri's character. i can't wait to meet siri's much disaproved of friend either. i'd also like to see siri and harry meet.

    anyway, looking foreward to seeing how this one develops

    shamanogler
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  • From ANON - madisonfairie on July 16, 2004
    This is so cute! I can't wait to read more. Personally I have always felt that there is no way that Harry is the only child of all four of the Mauraders.
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