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By : JulYa
  • From ANON - K on October 20, 2004
    England don't use euros. They use Pounds.

    I like this though.
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  • From ANON - LdDurham on September 27, 2004
    Hmm, I like the start of thisn't n't wait for more. I like the surley!Harry. :)
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  • From ANON - meow me again on September 27, 2004
    oh and it's not true about the cockroaches, we do have them ther just not common to see you'll only see them in really bad disgusting areas and were people are slobs! and if long review pep disagrees tell her to watch 'grim files' cos that really will show her!
    any questions just email
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  • From ANON - meow on September 27, 2004
    just because were part of europ doesn't mean we use the euro!
    We still use what most people call sterling or my pounpounds
    and it is far more expencive using euro than pound
    cos at the mo theres 1-46 to the pound

    not being bitchy so if seems like i am don't take offence
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  • From ANON - DragonFlame on September 25, 2004
    Just to let you know... last I heard they're still using the pound in England, they refused to switch over. YAY for England!
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  • From ANON - katt on August 11, 2004
    youre kidding me right? i mean even wizards I REPEAT WIZARDS CANNOT HAVE BABIES but what the hell its your story
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  • From ANON - leelee on August 10, 2004
    I looooove this story!!! I especially loe d/h stories w/a pregnant harry!! Please update soon!! Can u please e-mail me when u update, i would ery much like that thankz a mil!!
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  • From ANON - amanda on July 23, 2004
    i like this story so far cannot what for more
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  • From ANON - dobbiessweetie on July 19, 2004
    I absolutely love your story. It is soooo awesome. I can't wait for the rest of it. Please don't keep us waiting. I will start to have withdrawls.
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  • From ANON - Siobhan on July 16, 2004
    Ok I get that you are american, I do, but please if you don't know something could you ask! I'd be more than happy to help.

    In Britain the currency is Pounds not Euros.

    The whole "well I must be pregnant scene" went a bit fast if you know what I mean.

    Magic cannot be used outside of Hogwarts! Unless they have graduated, have they?

    In Britain, there are no motels, no such thing, the countries just aren't big enough, there are either Hotels, Inn's, or B&B

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    It's a Taxi not a Cab, it just isn't used here.

    Also even if you do insist on using the word cab, be aware that "The guy quickly stepped on the gas and hauled ass." this is wrong in so many ways, it's petrol not gas, and the term is "put their foot down" and there is no hauling of ass, neither word is used in the English language.

    In the majority, 99% of british people do not use the word GEE.

    Nor could anyplace in britain be infested with cockroaches, it's too cold for them to exist here, we don't have them.

    Jackass, another word not commonly used.

    Our phone books also don't have a business section in that sense, we have one book (the Yellow Pages) for residential phone numbers in the surrounding area, and the business book (The Thompson Local).

    Pediatricians do exist but not in such an easily accessible way, we have the NHS, if you have something anything wrong with you, even if you know what it is (pregnancy), you have to go to see a GP, and then they refer you to the local Pediatrician who IS based in a hospital, it's the way things work, also to note medical care is completely free, the only thing you have to pay for is prescriptions, and they are all the exact same price regardless of what you need. The only other option would be o pro private but not only would that cost way too much and would need soooo much paperwork filled in that it would be impossible for a fifteen year to to fake it, even with magic.

    Really do you expect us to believe that a muggle wouldn't question a guy that said he was pregnant?

    All in all you need to develop the plot, the characters and the spelling a lot more to make this a really good story.

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  • From ANON - Yana on July 16, 2004
    you have to tell Draco
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  • From ANON - Lena on July 15, 2004
    Good story. i'm liking it so far. only constructive thing i could offer would be to put more detail into it. Also with the last chapter i just think that the Doctor was way too accepting with harrykins condition. granted the dr. specialises in weird pregnacies but its not everyday you meet a man who thinks he's pregnate. they could have ran some tests instead of being so "ok cool." about it. But i'm just saying. Also more detail. the chapters seem to be over before they even start. if you put somemore detail into it maybe the chapters would be longer (hint ^_^).

    But anyway. Hope i helped, love the story!
    Lena
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  • From ANON - kay on July 15, 2004
    hihihihihi Oh boy!!! Keep going. hihihihi
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  • From ANON - Kimmy on July 15, 2004
    ok I'm reading this story and I like what I see. it would mena a lot to me if you were to keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2004
    omg please hurry with tht next chapter!!!

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