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Reviews for A Knock at the Door

By : Pearle
  • From ANON - Angie on August 24, 2004
    I must say your lemons were very fulfilling. You have been building this fic to a nice lemony scene and you didn't let us down. The way you portray the kid is just wonderful. Very god writing.
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  • From ANON - firestarter on August 23, 2004
    Just wanted to say i loved your story the whole way through and thanx.
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  • From ANON - Cecikuna on August 22, 2004
    Omigosh... I wasn't a SSHG fan at first, but gosh, this story is so sweet! I LOVED it it is absolutely now my favorite fanfic xD There were so many twists and turns, and the lemons weren't so bad xD Lols, the story was amazing, write soon, perhaps, with another? xD
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  • From ANON - snape on August 22, 2004
    I enjoyed the story, thanks for writing it. You might consider having a different beta go over the fic sometime, there are quite a lot of spelling and grammar errors.
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  • From ANON - Talene on August 22, 2004
    It was a beautiful and complete story that I have laughed and cried to. It feels complete and that sits very well with me. :) Please continue to write many such accomplished works!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 21, 2004
    Like I said on the other site...a truly wonderful tale that i am enjoying immencely!! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on August 20, 2004
    Loved loved loved this last chapter. I've been waiting for them to finally just admit they at least care for each other and want to be together. The signs are all there! I think its funny though Silenus has no clue LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kimberly on August 20, 2004
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

    I LOVE THIS STORY. I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS

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  • From ANON - spider69 on August 17, 2004
    YES write on write on! i cant get enuf of ur story..lol and I NEED A LEMON. this aint adult fanfiction . net for nuttin
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  • From ANON - orlando093 on August 10, 2004
    Glad you updated again! The scene in which Silenus asks their parents permission for the stay with Jessie was priceless. I can so imagine they both had all kind of worst case scenario's in mind because of her serious sound before asking the question, while such a simple thing as accepting an invitation by your best friend can be so important at such age. I like you show both sides of her, the clever girl that is quite capable of being her fathers match and on the other hand the 12r olr old with all her teenage desires.

    And another thing: I do find it quite understandable that both both Hermione and Severus don't recognize their feelings for each other. He because he still hasn't forgive himself for the choices he made in his past and she because she has devided her life in different sections, in which being togheter with Severus a parent to their child, is stored in another compartiment as having a relation with someone. And they are of course both afraid of intimacy and both desperate for staying in control :-)

    I remeber i read at some other reviewpage of your story someone wondering why she was dating men in the first place. I think this has to do with her wish to stay in control. When you are meeting a new person, you are far more in control in regulating the amount and extend of intimacies you are willing to share when closer contact is developing, then when you start dating with someone you already knohe fhe fact that Severus and she already have some kind of context enlarges for both of them the barrier to know each other better and have a kind of fresh look at each other.
    But as you already showed in the developing relation between Silenus and her father, being honest to each other really can cross bridges. Hope Severus and Hermione realize this is also true for the way they approach each other.
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  • From ANON - helen on August 05, 2004
    Love the story so far - hope you are going to finish it soon or aast ast continue it.

    cheers..............H
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on July 25, 2004
    Great story so far. I have one questi Now Now I get that Selenus is loyal to her mother after all she only just met her father, but, I'm seeing only how she reacts to Severus after just meeting him. Doesn't she feel a bit resentful to her mother for keeping her from her father for so many years. I mean lets put aside the fact Hermione was trying to keep her safe. She's been safe for a long time, so why wasn't anything said? How does Selenus feel about that? She kind of let Severus have it there at the end. I would be interested to have her confront her mother about this.
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  • From ANON - Angie on July 24, 2004
    Of all what you have written so far, this chapter has been my favorite. Love the kid. Loking forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 23, 2004
    I was unsure at first, but this is turning into a lovely story. Hind-sight being 20/20, good call on Hermione being classified as deceased by the MoM. It looks as though true relationships will have the opportunity to develop as a resu Qui Quite believable; good call!
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  • From ANON - crissy on July 23, 2004
    but you can be in love! just because you weren't in love in the past says nothing abvout the future!
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